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TELL HER

TELL HER

    

                                                 
                          
                                                          

                                   She plays with words like they are lollies,
                                  Sweetly and bouncily rolling in her mouth.
                             Tell her! Say her words are melodies to your ears
                                            But no comfort to your heart.
                                             Tell her that love found you
                                         And with burning eyes it fired you,
                               Then joyful and secure it slowly started to mature,
                                          Without again turning its face away.
                               It might navigate outside the well-ordered world
                                                        Into a bit of chaos,
                                Hitting the rocks and crashing into boulders
                                   Ripping the sail and roll over and over
                                 But It will survive the nature of its own storm,
                                                     And find its way home.

                                    
                                   --Bernadete van der Wielen

                                 
                               
                           

                                  
                               

                                    
                             

                             

                                  
                  

                                    

                                    
                            

 

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thomas3535

really amazing work and I love the 
She plays with words like they are lollies,
                                  Sweetly and bouncily rolling in her mouth

 

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Bernadete van d...

Your images are stunning! I will take time and read your poems soon,
I am sure they are equally stunning. 

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sparrowsong

Hello Bernadete...

All the shy people just had a panic attack...

😲

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

hi Bernadete! really love these words! keep them coming!...........................Jim

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Bernadete van d...

Thank you very much Jim. Yes, Hi to you too. Good to have you reading 
my work. I have read some of yours (can't keep up, you've quite a few, Lol).
One of my favourites are Simple Finesse and Infinite. Your writings have
purpose and value, I enjoy reading. 
 

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Bernadete van d...

Thank you for your words. You always have something nice to say, Mr Baker. 

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Bernie Martin

Thank you for directing me to this poem. Yes your description of playing with words like lollies is the way I envisaged Marie in my book. And Ken is the one who has the more romantic soul who loves to hear her words but those words don't always provide the comfort they should. And yes everything you write in the second half of your poem is also true of Ken but when you say at the end that love finds its way home it does but its home becomes a like a lock up in his memory, one which might be opened at a later date. 
Could your poem relate to my story? Yes absolutely. 

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