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Tender breathing.

Maybe that was all it took for me to fall deeply into her arms
I'll take care of you, in the place of so many lost I love you's

the longing in her eyes that redirected hope, calming my fears
My heart begins to cope, In a moment I thought to be most lost,

she saved me from drowning,
And yet I dove into the depths of her soul

revived by her tender breathing,
Believing I had been reborn
in her eyes of truth

Maybe it was those simple words that ment so much to hear,
that whispered more than those three words
I love you in my ear

Suddenly everything once lost,
all confusion inside my heart
my head became so clear

I'll take care of you 'she said

For always my dear.

Nardine Sanderson 29/11/2015

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Nardine...

Great write!

Words from a caring heart...

Suddenly everything once lost,
all confusion inside my heart
my head became so clear

I'll take care of you 'she said
For always my dear.

Beautiful!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Nardine Sanderson

Thanks sis , pleased with this one, something new
Love and hugs sweetheart, nardine xox

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Nardine Sanderson

I thought I'd try writing for a man's perspective
Glad you like it bazza my Aussie mate, love ya sweetie pie xoxox

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Àron .

Wow... that's awesome... 

All I need..All I desire... If you ever lucky to have that everything becomes possible. No "home" will stand through the worst without a solid foundation.. and if it's done with love and care... you got everything.

I'll do anything for an embrace and to feel and hear those words;

"I'll take care of you 'she said

For always my dear."

To feel part of something bigger and more is everything.

THANK YOU for sharing...*MwaH*

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