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THANK YOU FOR YOUR SERVICE

THANK YOU FOR YOUR SERVICE

If I could hear your tears from under the ground...

The coffin holds the sound...

So much like the Story of Jesus I heard once or twice...

Where he lived and he died for me...

I wonder if he lived the same for the life of me...

​​​​I think if you were still here like the others who made it through...

You would be on this side of missing...

​​​​​​No one comes back the same...

Would you do it again?

Stand up for the ones who let you down?

Would you fight for us to live taking a chance with your own?

You did your best under draft or free will...

I was hoping a story could finally be written like this...

Hero's before their deaths mean so much...

We all put our weapons down no one wants to fight this mess...

In honor of you living and dead...

Many years returned some partly bodied and some not at all...

Some fought through it wheelchairs and all, smiles and pop a wheelies up and down the hall...

Some still stand with every tear that continues to fall...

The ending unfortunately goes something like this...

Greed and corruption at an all time high...

Everyday people are dying...

Guns, Drugs and Suicides...

Your effort to die and to save...

I am one living person who lives in this mess which never seems to clear...

You died for me and I just a stranger...

I hope this makes you feel better because I don't want you to feel you didn't do enough...

You remind me of a Story I heard about a Man named Jesus...

This story continues to go something like this...

Thank you for your service...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

 

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GREG TUCKER THE...

Thank You for writing this Sparrowsong.  As a Veteran I am proud of the words you wrote.  We fought for the ability to be free.  I just hope just one day that those who think it is ok to Kneel, will realize what disrespect they are portraying to those who sacrificed their lives for them

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Who knows appreciation when people have such a sense of entitlement and unappreciation?

People are satisfied and happy with living and acting like a heathen making money...

We don't really need them to be better...

They don't need to worry about being over crowded and I don't have to worry that Heaven will be either...

God knows I like spacious surroundings...

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Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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lodigiana

We must always show appreciation  and thankfulness for the sacrifices made  so unflinchingly by so many to safeguard our present and our childrens future.  I sometimes do wonder  though if some people deserve the benefits  given them by  those men and women who made the ultimate sacrifice  An excellent tribute Sparrowsong and sensitively written. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
Lodigiana xxx

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

We certainly can show so much disrespect to what they went through for us...

It's easy to compare how we treat Jesus and them the same...

Forgiven, protected, and saved...

Still we show the best we can do...

Knowing we could actually be better...

Only then would we see our full potential and blessings...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Tina...

Still trying to catch up here...

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Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Theresa...

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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