Poem -

The Thanks for Givivng

I would like to thank all who gives but most of all, those who give should be mostly thanks

I have been bless with the knowledge to even understand the purpose of these to words when they fuse and become Thanksgiving.  When these word become a action in my life, it contains of good spirit, family, unity a tradition, and peace. For some this day was more of a massacre,to say that and learn Thanksgiving true history hurts my soul, but as blind as it might seems I still choose to engage into these holiday only because through the truth it has made my understanding of my Thanksgiving  even more to celebrate.  So to the one's who went through and still go through despair I praise you because through your truth you have given me more reason to hold that day special, so to put this poem to rest I would just like to say thanks for giving the truth

Like 0 Pin it 1
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Valerie Beasley...

Theo…as for me I am thankful for everyday and all the things that make my life worth the living.  Sometimes "tradition" obscures the truth and it gets lost in meaningless trivia. Yes, the true story of Thanksgiving is certainly different from what we celebrate today.  Great write!  I see that the truth has delighted you and the "good spirit, family unity in tradition and peace" is what you celebrate in the poem.

val

Reply
author
Theo Tolbert

Thank you for your feed back I appreciate it hopefully in time I will improve on my writing skills

Reply
author
Louise Carroll

Well done, this is brilliant. So true and so well written. Best of luck with this and congrats. 

Reply
Poem -

Verse

"This knowledge we eat from

Might not be the best of fruit

That's why I'm raising...

Poem -

The Wombman

The Wombman
For 9 long months the ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​wombman hid me from the world in darkness, there i was feed, nurture and...
Poem -

Alexander The Horrible

There was a young boy
alone who battle inside
of Rome who would
only kill his own...

Latest poems in Freestyle

Poem -

TIME TO SWITCH?

TIME TO SWITCH?

If every Employee said we're through...

We want a Break...

Go get our hair done...

...

Poem -

WHILE YOU LAY DYING

WHILE YOU LAY DYING

They're wrapped by their own Security...

Yelling for their Power...

​​​​​​Having to prove...

Poem -

Prey Power

Prey Power

The ravenous predator
chases it's fleeing prey
for the expressed purpose
of doing the...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com