Poem -
That's All We've Seen
The grass was green
And the tendrils rose
From the ground
And the grass was green
Some cut their spleens
Blood and ash we found
Though the grass was green
It lost it's clean
The moment "it"
Touched down
On grass of green
Shattered screams
Snuffed was every sound
Apocalyptic cryptic scripted
Codes that paint the clouds
Puny humans heard the rumors
If they come bow down
You'll keep your life
Save your wife
Just bow
On that grass of green
Or grass of red
Millions dead...
So far
That's all we've seen
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The "Only" Curious Onlooker for sure!!...........talk about scary , apocalyptic, cryptic, pessimism........."IT" landed and the grass turned red.........fighting to remain green...........and bowing down to the invaders..........wow!!............this could literally scare an elderly person to death...........I know my balls shriveled a little after reading this! (lol!).............love the pic bro!! (planet of the apes!)............after you conceived of this as your write...........did it write itself?...........because this has great flow..........scary stuff brother.............you are SO creative............and a potentially AWESOME wordsmith..........just my opinion man............but I've watched you grow in LEAPS and BOUNDS brother!!...........another impressive write............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Thanks Tony glad you picked up on the pic reference..I think at some point in the production of this piece the pen was taken from me and it just wrote itself..I try to be as sufficient as unique as possible because so many of my predecessors are and I'm glad you're seeing my progress, honestly thanks brother
The only, Curious Onlooker
Curious awesome write, love the repetition of green grass sounds to me like war and I agree with Tony you are a heck of a word smith this line proves it.
"Apocalyptic cryptic scripted." Well done brother allstars.
Thanks Devon I appreciate the sentiment, that line is my favorite, thanks again brother