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"THE ABYSS"

"THE ABYSS"

Time passing
For each of us
An abyss, awaiting
Our experiences...

What other reason
To live
And then die
Unless,
To pass on information
Through DNA
About Love and hate,
Peace and war,
And the intricacies of our lives...

But oh so importantly
We must
Offer the abyss
The magic of our dreams
For it is in our imagination
Where the abyss
Is not the end
Merely
An intriguing obstacle
That God provides...

Tony Taylor

 

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Kimmy Alan

Tony's poem captures the mystery of life after-death, in an inspiring way.

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Tony Taylor

Thanx so much KIMMY ~ succinctly perfect comment....... love this........ high fives bro!!....... ttyl........T xo mm?✳☀✴

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SilvyLove

Tony..... AMEN....Man that cute and inspiring that's why I love it. "Time passing
for each of us an abyss, awaiting our experiences" ... Wowwwww..... Totally love it.... good job my friend..... hugs and kisseeesss......

Silvylove :)
 

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Tony Taylor

COOL Sister SILVY!!......so glad you were hanging' with me on that one.......love the comment...... appreciate the positive support sweetheart!!..........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo.   ?✴✳☀

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Rose Sho

 A thought provoking kinda write...Time is indeed passing for each of us...For each of us an abyss, awaiting our experiences...Got my mind swirling...

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Tony Taylor

Hey your ROSENESS!!....isn't,your mind always swirling?!(smiles)...........glad you liked pretty lady!!......... smiles..........T xo.  ,?✴☀?

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Deborah Evans

Hi Tony So many thoughts racing around
in my mind  after reading your piece 
My thoughts were of this abyss being the place between life and 
death not so much from birth to death but as in maybe near death experience 
where some have said your life flashes by before you
where all our life experiences  are somehow accounted for
and passed on to begin a new chapter
A place where you sometimes glimpse the next stage of existence
or pass on to that next stage, where I think a whole new world 
exists 
I don`t know if that makes sense but they were my thoughts 
Anyways I loved you piece as always 
A great write 
Love n hugs Debs xo
 
 

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! Thanx DEBS!..... so sorry..... didn't know this was here....... the idea was that place just after death is a transition for our energy...... a separate reality ~ if you will..... where our Spiritual Energy continues its evolutionary process..... leaving death as thing NOT to fear...... but to greet with dignity and awareness!!......thanx again sister girl... for the "WAY COOL" comment....... hugs-n-smiles ......T xo.  ?✳✴☀

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Tony Taylor

Cool Thanx Sir LORRIS!!......high fives!!........T xo ?✳✴☀

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The Bee

My brother T, I don't know if I'm on the right track or not, but, I think the " Abbys" is a place waiting for us to expose our deeply innermost thoughts, are we courageous enough to show the "Abyss" deep down inside us or will we try to cover up our most inner feelings in fear of being swallowed up. A tremendous read my man T.

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Tony Taylor

Hey BEE, so cool to hear from you....... you got it bro......The abyss is the jumping off point just before death....where you're sure you've been a good person or not.......appreciate the positive ink my friend ........miss you around here..........thanx for this!!....... peace.......T xo.  ?

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Larry Ran

My Dear Brother Poet Tony,

As time goes on, our lives become a kaleidoscope, which we record every day.  As we approach our senior years, we visualize these memories from our past.  Some bring laughter, some bring tears.  We fight for our longevity.  Unlike what medicine calls its number one taker of lives, it is truly the grim reaper.  Laugh, smile, be happy, for then God will provide His ladder from the abyss to His stars, where you will spend the last years of your life in harmony.

Peace, Love and Rockets,

Larry xxx

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Tony Taylor

Dear Brother Poet LARRY!!

I can't tell you how much I appreciate the time you take with my stuff....... you're an inspiration my friend.....looking forward to meeting you in person....... talk to you soon my friend!....:.. LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.  ?☀✴✳

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Tony Taylor

Thanx LINDA!!..... sorry I didn't see this sooner....... appreciate the positive ink my friend...... smiles.......T xo.  ?✳✴☀

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Sharon Maria Moemise

While your poem is very factual and true, I couldn't help reading it over and over again as the way you bring forth that truth, has such an eeriness about it. It gives me goosebumps to have to truly understand what our lives are really just about. Very inspiring and wonderfully written. I enjoy reading your work.

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Tony Taylor

VERY cool comment SHARON!!..... sorry I didn't see this sooner....... It's such a great pleasure to hear a colleague say those words "I had to read it over again"....... truly appreciate the positive ink girlfriend!!....... made my day...... big, huge, smiles!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo.  ?✳✴☀

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Lorna

Very deep Tony, great write x

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Tony Taylor

Yay!!..Thanx so much LORNA!!.......appreciate your taking time with this one.....it has a special place for me........gracias senorita!!.......smiles......T xo 
 

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Tony Taylor

Thanx DARKLY!!.....you rock girlfriend!!.......Love and Rockets!!.......T xo   ??

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Lily Cas

The picture you used for this has me imagining I'm the woman sitting on the stool with my eyes closed imagining everything that could be possible after death and what I will leave behind for others to learn or share. Everyone must have an "Abyss" somewhere inside of them just waiting to be explored whenever they feel like they are able even if it winds up being in their last hours or after they've moved on and it's their next chapter in life. I think I tend to retreat into mine whenever I'm feeling down and detached from the world. I think this write has multiple meanings to me of which I definitely think I'd like to explore more. I love this one so much that it's pinned and might just wind up on my wall. Awe inspiring write :) 

xxxLily 

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! Thanx SO much LILY!!.....I Love the picture too...... and I LOVE this amazing comment..... thank you for sharing this with me.......I am so happy you found some inspiration here........ just the idea that you went this far back to find this write means ALOT to me....... you're a blessing sweet poetess!!....... talk to ya soon!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  ?☀✴✳

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