Poem -
The awakening
It is a long forgotten sunrise. Wakening up through my eyes.
Filled with yellows, and emerald green. And the brightest orange, that I have ever seen.
Remembering me, that I was asleap. I felt into dreams, slowly, but deep.
Untill I was blessed, to wake up and see. The beauty deep within, reflecting outside of me.
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Awww such a simple but elegant poem Nathalie, I like how deep its but the theme is not lost. All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
Thank you! I indeed like things to be simple ?
Also Welcome to the Cosmos!
OK.....I understand your intent......It's intriguing......BUT...if you're going to write in English you're going to have to REPRESENT!!....there are 4 misspelled words within and 3 grammatical faux pa's that distract from the overall power of this write!!......regardless Nathalie....there IS some serious brilliance driving this piece!!......and I (for one) am willing to overlook that for the promise that your words are portraying here!!.......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....AND......WELCOME to COSMO!!........Peace!!.........T xo : )
Hi Tony, how r you? Which are the misspelled words? I am sorry that you were distracted ?.Â
Yes the sunrise is long forgotten by so many today. Well penned.