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The Biggest Best Star

author
Marion

Tonight
I search for the brightest star
Reminding myself that
Nothing
Dies

But I know this, I know this
I always knew this, that
Our bodies
Are no more than
Flesh blood
Disguise

So tonight
I gaze at the biggest
Best star
Whist holding
Your
Hand
In my own

Because I feel you right now
Feel you gaze up with me
The only thing changed
Is that
You
Are now
Free 

M P 15/7/21

 
 

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Jill Tait

Bloody Shamazing my lovely lil ⭐️💕💕💕

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Gwendoline

So beautiful Marion. Makes the reader well up at the end 💗

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Shaun Cronick

Marion, Jill and Gwen say it so well and what you have written is so beautifully gracious and so touching in equal measure.
A superb write all round.💗
 

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