The bird is building a nest

Hello Deepak...

​​​Birds don't need any tools they can perfectly set in so many places...

After watching the bird build her nest have you tried to copy how she does it and make a nest yourself?

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Well this is a lovely poem. I often find that being out in nature motivates me in all aspects of my life. Nature is a great motivator as well as a great leveler. Fab work :)
 

Hi
I enjoyed this, lovely in its detail, the repetition of the bird building its nest, really feels like the little guy has alot to do
lorna x

They are so amazing aren't they...your work here is amazing too...hugs x

This is smashing .. you can beat a drum, but you just can't beat a bit of nature can ya .. and I am a bit of a bird freak too .. Neville 

It's good to see you back here mate, I actually remember reading some of your poems a long long time ago! I especially Liked the final verse,

Don't know how many enlightening things,
This little bird has taught me...
she taught me to set a goal and work hard on it. Doing work on time, without complaining to anyone,
Fulfilling our responsibilities.....
And many things this little bird has taught me...
Everything he taught is still working for me.
The bird is making the nest..................................
The bird is making the nest..................................

I totally agree. I'm more of a numbers guy, so for me life is like an investment and there's always risk, return and reward. Peace to you my friend, hope you are well.

Thoroughly enjoyed!!

A lovely write and what we can learn from the bird . Thumbs up!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Sounds like a single mom, great write, much enjoyed

Hi I haven't been on here in a while and wanted to give a rating but can't find the option for it.  What am I missing? Any help/advice appreciated thanks
 

figured it out doh 5 stars from me good luck congrats on the nom

Pure and brilliant throughout and effortlessly delivered in turn.
Captivating to read and that one word you use brilliantly that really stands out ..responsibilities.
And that is how it is in life when one reaches the age of maturity.
Can evidently see Deepak your poem has been selected for a contest entry.
Rightfully so and good luck to you on that front.
Thanks for sharing and full honours bestowed and have now started to follow your good self.
And good luck again Deepak.

lovely poem , brings forth the joy of spring

Yes, birds are amazing.  Your well done poem shows how amazing birds and nature are. My husband feeds gobs of birds in our back yard.  Our cat loves to get in window and watch birds eat from feeders on our window seal.  I feed crows unsalted crackers and peanuts and they will show up after I put that out and say Caw Caw.  Neighbors probably think I am crazy, but yes birds are fascinating and can learn how hard they work, even when we help.

Beautiful write. This will be a great story for a children's book. it felt very kind, selfless, motivational.It a Godly message. Hope you consider publishing it.

Hello Deepak, your imagery soothes me with the site of nature and it's pleasant beauty. 

Welcome back! How have you been Deepak? Write something for us. Greetings from Bernadete. 

Deeply thoughtful ..... poetry must be a gift