Poem -
The Black Path
Blindly walking the black path
Ecstasy peppered with pain
Thick raindrops splash my foreheadย
A feeble attempt of redemptionย
The putrid oil of sour soil
Gray death smiles in the rain
A pea soup fog
Morning walkers with dogs
Where did this journey begin?ย
My eyes avert their questioning gaze
No sleep for days
I answer silently...ย
With saturated soul and skin
Comments
brilliant poem
Thank you so much Ebrahim.
- Sydย
This was very brilliantly penned Syd. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Anthony.
Much appreciated - Sydย
Always such an honor to read your musings! Well crafted piece my poet friend
Likewise Lisa. I always appreciate you reading. I always look forward to your kind comments.
Sincerelyย - Sydย
Sounds like the product of a walk and a thoughtย
great write
It certainly is the product of a walk and a thought Edward. Reflections of when I was younger.
Thanks for reading and leaving feed back.
Take careย - Sydย
Love it mate,
Nigel
Cheers Nigel.
I'm always greatful of your feedback
- Sydย
Hi Syd...Great imagery that creates the greyness of a walk in the rain....I love poetry that makes me feel and see what the reader expresses...and this one definitely does that!ย Thanks for sharing your amazing talent.ย xo ;)ย
Thank you for your lovely comment Cherie. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, it may have took me a while but hopefully I'm getting the hang of this 'poetry thing'.ย
I don't get much time to read others work much lately with working extended hours.
Hope you're keeping wellย - Syd xoย
nice one
T
Thank you so much T
An intensely deep write! You created such a strong atmosphere, I could feel every line. Truly, during walks many things can happen inside us. Beautifully expressed! ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ
Thank you for reading and leaving feed back SD and also for the pin. Very much appreciated.ย
Take careย - Syd xoย
Brilliant write Syd. Pinned. DD x
Thank you DD. I very much appreciate your kind comment and the pin.
- Syd xoย