Poem -
The Black Path
Blindly walking the black path
Ecstasy peppered with pain
Thick raindrops splash my foreheadΒ
A feeble attempt of redemptionΒ
The putrid oil of sour soil
Gray death smiles in the rain
A pea soup fog
Morning walkers with dogs
Where did this journey begin?Β
My eyes avert their questioning gaze
No sleep for days
I answer silently...Β
With saturated soul and skin
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Comments
brilliant poem
Thank you so much Ebrahim.
- SydΒ
This was very brilliantly penned Syd. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Anthony.
Much appreciated - SydΒ
Always such an honor to read your musings! Well crafted piece my poet friend
Likewise Lisa. I always appreciate you reading. I always look forward to your kind comments.
SincerelyΒ - SydΒ
Sounds like the product of a walk and a thoughtΒ
great write
It certainly is the product of a walk and a thought Edward. Reflections of when I was younger.
Thanks for reading and leaving feed back.
Take careΒ - SydΒ
Love it mate,
Nigel
Cheers Nigel.
I'm always greatful of your feedback
- SydΒ
nice one
T
Thank you so much T
Brilliant write Syd. Pinned. DD x
Thank you DD. I very much appreciate your kind comment and the pin.
- Syd xoΒ