Poem -
The Blood Rain Of Seasons
In summers past, I died
A child,
And in the slow melt
Of autumn's
Colors
( all yellow and slippery)
Where, in a greenish
Morphing,
I fell
And was born again
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Then,
As winter's cold
( that icy death)
Came upon me,
The liar's promise
Of early
Springtime, where once
Again
I died.....a child
And wept
A desperate pool
Of passing years
An inevitable
Discontent,
As suicides
Relentlessly pursuing,
The Blood
Rain,
Of seasons.....
Tony Taylor
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Comments
wow this is amazing Tony!
YAY!!.... so cool to see you on here my friend!!.....thanx so much for this DARKLY!!...... hugs-n-smiles!!......T xo ?β³β΄β??β₯
Hi Tony,
Brilliant Write!!!!
FromΒ
Sana :)
Hey SANA!!.... so good to hear from you my friend!!.....thanx so much taking time with this one..... much love to you & yours!!..... smiles.....T xo ?β³β΄ββ₯???
Like always, your writings are amazing :)Β
Hey GWEN!!......thanx so much for this!!.... also, I like the picture of you and the baby!!!.... stay groovy!!...... hugs-n-smiles!!.......T xo ?β³β΄ββ₯??
wow wow oh wow what poem IΒ wish I could write this as you death becomes you ha ha
Thank you so much Sir ETSELL!!.....if death were becoming....I suppose I could find charcoal gray overcoat!!..... appreciate this my friend!:......ttyl....T xo ?β³β΄ββ₯??
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
"For every turn, turn, turn"
There is a season
Each with a promise
But as the colors change
And the years quickly pass
The lies accrue
As each sanguineous downpour
Brings finality closer
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Dear Poet Brother LARRY!!..... I'll never be able to thank you for all that you do.....for the time sent ~ just considering the poetic reply you've just so purposefully delivered here.... your inner power station is definitely from the stuff of TESLA himself!!..... be well brother.... and thank you for this!!..... smiles....T xo ?β³β΄ββ₯??
Your words are pleasantly "shocking".Β Β
Larry xxx
Smiles.... you're funny Larry!!.....ttyl...T xo ?β³β΄β₯β?β₯??
Love this TT. The emotions of each season and changing, adapting to each one as they come and go through your morbid words paints such wicked awesome imagery. The way you construct the write and narrate it throughout to the reader is truly inspiring. Thats the way I see it....Peace brother.
Hey SIR LaPORTE!!.....have I told you that I love you today!... good!..... that would be inappropriate!! (smiles)......thanx for this totally stellar comment brother poet!!..... and thank you for noticing the intricacies!!.....I work hard on that stuff dude!!.... smiles...... stay groovy!!....EAGLES SUCK!!..... peace!!....T xo ?β³β΄ββ₯β₯???