Poem -
~ The Blood Rain Of Seasons ~
In summers past, I died
a child,
and in the slow melt
of autumnal
colors, (all yellow and slippery)
on a greenishly
morphing morning,
I fell
and was born again,
across borders
that separate
realities
timelessly bent,
as winter'sÂ
cold
and icy death
came upon me
with a liars promise
of early
springtime, where once
again
as I died a child
I morosely
wept,
a desperate pool
of passing years
an inevitable, unstoppable,
discontent,
as suicide's
relentless pursuit,
ofÂ
the blood rain
in seasons,
so incomplete,
and
sadly spent...
Tony Taylor
* June, 2021
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with a liars promise
of early
springtime, where once
again
as I died a child
ooh love this poetic piece Tony bravo my friend â¤ď¸đšâ¤ď¸
Thanks Tons JILL!!.....what a lovely comment my friend.....I appreciate it most sincerely!!......smiles......T xo : )
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Regret oozes from this write...lovely stuff x
This is a powerful piece Tony.
Your Blood Rain Seasons is like a time capsule of despair, that many suffer. The use of the seasons really gives the reader a sense of time passing. Yet the misery clings to every living momentÂ
This is a brilliant piece that places the reader on a spiritual journey, from the perspective of a soul who suffers when in this particular worldÂ
Impressive my friend and definitely being Pinned :)
Your good friend Gwen x
My Amazing friend GWEN!!....it is ALWAYS a pleasure to have received your thoughts and impressions on my work.....yours is a pen that I do SO look forward to hearing from......and once again you have eluded to a crucial part of the intent of this piece's heart.....its 'spiritual journey'!!....thank you so much dear poet sister.....you are such a gift to this site and its members!!.....Lots of Love to you and yours!!.....Big, fat, Smiles!!.....T xo : )
PS>.....Never change....just keep writing......the world of the poetic will one day sing your praises my friend!! : )
Tony so forlorn brimming then overflows with loneliness and hopelessness in equal tragic measures.
Brilliant and powerful told from that doomed/damned and lost soul, one can't help feel sorry for, as that souls clock is ticking until a gotterdammerung of said soul's own making, of a downfall by their own hands.
Captivating to read and beautifully penned of personal angst alas with no second chances.
For a choice has been made and the die has been cast.
A tricky subject matter to write about, but your poem is a great read from that soul's tragic perspective.
In a way doubly tragic, first to commit to it (and as I read into it) perhaps a tad of regret.
Irreversible regret.Â
Brilliant and written with great aplomb by a poet so skilled as your good self.
Thanks Tony and quickly pinned my poetry brother.
And full poetry kudos also bestowed. Â
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Sir CRONICK!!....wow!!.....your comments and your wonderfully insightful impressions on poetry in general cast shadows far and wide....I think everyone on this entire site looks forward to hearing your thoughts on their work.....and I am First among them dear poet brother!!......Thank you most sincerely for this inspiring and truly impactful insight into this piece and its intent!!....yours is such a kind and elevating pen!!.....and very much appreciated kind Sir!!......Lots of Love to you and yours.......Be well dear poet brother!!......your friend......T xo  : )
Fantastic piece Tony, full of emotion.
Dear SUSAN.....well I am just so surprised at the response this piece has gotten.....I mean just to have your impressions on my poem is quite uplifting and inspiring!!......Thank you So much my friend!......Glide On Love......your cyber-friend and admirer......T xo : )
Beautiful imagery Tony, itâs been a while scrolling through my past work I came across your encouraging comments that kept me writing, although the child in us has died let the light of possibilities in the present and future give us hope in our own potential. Continue to encourage and inspire us all â¤ď¸đđ˝
Wow!! TAM!!....I am so happy to hear from you.....it's been too long.....I hope all is well with you and yours....Thanx so much for these VERY kind and encouraging words my friend!!.....Hope to read some more of your stuff again soon!!......Glide On Love dear poet sister!!......smiles....T xo : )