Poem -
The Blue
O pregnant sky
As blue as a painter's
Breast -a-trembling,
Hands sweating,
Over magnificent borders
Alone there,
And lost in the blue
Of God's
Once in a lifetime
Gift,
Of a gust of wind,
Contrasting the holy blue
By a feather's
Wafting
As paint finds its way
Magically,
Softly,
Across a pristine canvas
As the hands of that wind
And Buddhism,
Spreads
Its intoxication,
With love of the sky
And the bold
Undertaking,
And unabashed unveiling
Of,
"The Fortress In The Sky"...
Tony Taylor
Note: inspired by the building of "The Fortress In The Sky" that occurred during the early spread of Buddhism in Sri Lanka, and other like countries.
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Comments
Divine imagery!
You have a wonderfully sensuous eye; the vision of which gushes from your tender pen.
A joy!!
J ;)
Thanx JASON!!....... always appreciate that you take time with my stuff brother poet........ hugs-n-smiles..........T xo. ?✴☀✳
I love this, such fantastic and vivid imagery....pinned it
Lorna xx
YAY!! Thanx Miss CAIZLEY!!.......eapecially for the PIN........VERY much appreciated my friend........ hugs-n-smiles......T x. ?✳✴☀
excellent imagery linda
Thanx LINDA....... always greatly appreciated girlfriend....... bless you........ hugs-n-smiles .......T xo. ?✳✴☀
A poet with a painter' eye! Tony certainly fills that role. To me the imagery of the wind as wisdom, through the teachings of Buddhism, is a strong evocative image which Tony has captured completely.
Wow Thanx ROWLAND!...a Perfect comment..... covering my intent precisely....... appreciate you taking time with this one........ big, huge, smiles ........peace and hair grease!!.........T xl. ?✳✴☀
Immeasurable quality and consistency to this giving it a worthy backbone. Your abilities at communication stand you in good stead when expressing ideas and concepts.
Thoughtful indomitable creation which is energetically delivered. Great.
Wishing you the very best !
Take care my friend. :)
Yay!! Thanx SIR WATERS!!....I was hoping you'd catch this one......... something that's been brewing for a while........ can't thank you enough for your continued support......... this is a VERY inspiring comment......... and truly appreciated brother poet!!........ big smiles........T xo. ?☀✴✳
:) Keep up the great work !
All the best to you !
Hi Tony A Wonderful poem beautiful
imagery you paint in words
I have read over and over
must pin this one A pleasure to read
Great write !
Love n hugs Debs xo
Cool!!.......Thanx DEBS!!...... always makes me smile when I hear you say you read it more than once!!....... you're the bee's knees!!....... big smiles........ hugs-n-smiles!!........T xo
Wow such a beautiful flow of words angel you always capture the imagination
Love and hugs
Giggles the poet
Hey thanx girlfriend ......where have you been hiding?....... appreciate the positive feedback and especially for going this far back to find this one........ be well sister poet!!......ttyl.......smiles........T xo ?☀✴✳