Poem -
THE COURAGEOUS SAILOR
He sets off on a journey...
He has given his heart to the lady who waits on land...
He knows that he doesn't have much time...
To be away from his hearts desire one more moment...
Something he didn't want to face...
His journey began on a bright, sunny, and calm day...
The lady waits on her sailor man to reach her shore...
Winds began to pick up...
Waves have risen higher...
The boat begins to take on water...
The courageous sailor knows there is no turning back...
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
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Hey FEATHERS!!......I agree with C!!.......there HAS to be part two........ or perhaps........ this was intended to tickle the imagination!!.......... regardless......... your uniqueness shines again here......... brightly........ well done girlfriend!!........... Love and Rockets!!.........T xo
Hello Sis Cherie...
This is a different type of write for me...
Message in a bottle with a little twist?Â
I actually wrote this without a part two in mind...
I thought it would be interesting if anyone who read it could...
Imagine how it should go?
A little suspense?
A little mystery?
Thank you for your comment...
I am glad it found it tense...
Hugs and Smiles!Â
sparrowsongÂ
Hello Soul Sis...
You said it the way I would have if I wrote a part two...
Only mine would have actually been in reverse...
I was actually thinking about it...
First, I would have had it have a happy ending...
Then I was thinking about the shark attack...
That one final kiss before they became a meal...
Then still somehow they were rescued and in the hospital after they woke up...
They loved each other even more...
Still somehow coming back to that happy ending...
Thank you for adding your creativity to this...
Purple luv and hugs xo :)Â
sparrowsongÂ
Hello Tony...
When I wrote this...
I didn't have a part two in mind...
I think I will leave it to the imagination...
Sometimes, Â it can take years for a good sequel...
Thank you for the words...
My uniqueness shines...
Hugs and Smiles!Â
FeathersÂ
Hey sparrows song a wonderful tale , you need to add a part two. I loved the picture and words fell right in place .I enjoyed this alot. Hugs to you rockÂ
Hello Rock...
Glad you enjoyed!Â
A part two?
There have been requests for it huh?
I didn't realize there would be requests...
I have been given a couple of suggestions...
I will think about it...
I am not sure when and if it will happen...
Feel free to let me know how you would like it to go...
Thank you for your comment...
Hugs and Smiles!Â
sparrowsongÂ
I enjoy the suspenseÂ
the ambiguity is causing tearsÂ
and the heart is begging for mercyÂ
good write Sparrow different from youÂ
and demonstrates your talent!Â
Luv from Jai :)
Hello Jai...
That is such a great compliment...
I am glad you enjoyed this!Â
Glad you were touched my friend...
Thank you very much!Â
Best wishes!Â
Hugs and Smiles!Â
sparrowsongÂ
I enjoyed this and many others on your page!
your fan.
Hello Dan...
Thank you for your gift of this very kind comment and support...
I am a fan of yours too...
Hugs and Smiles!Â
Your fan
sparrowsongÂ