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the crying nights

I like the rain
I like the crying nights
I like
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How sky drops
Tears everywhere

Makes no excuses
Doesn't care

I like the passion. The noise.
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The unashamed crescendo 
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how it dribbles all the colours 
from the lamplight to the street
I like the pitying self patter 
how it sounds so fucking bleak

The way it puts
Its heartbreak out there
For the world to see and feel

I like the rawness of its sorrow
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how that sorrow feels so real
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I like the rain

M ~

 

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Shirley Harrison

I love the rain, I get this so much, another stunning piece of poetry dear Marion. 🌹 🌧️ ❤️ 

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Marion

Thanks so much lovely lady x

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Being Me

Me too! I love the rain. And I love this poem x

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Marion

Thanks so much Tina x

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Poetic Cries

Yes! I love this! I love hearing the rain piddle paddle on the tin roof  just awesome write! To know that others enjoy the rain like this is nice!

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Marion

Thankyou so much  Charles... apart from snow my favourite weather is a torrential violent storm... but I'm a nice person... honest 😊😁

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Ian William

A terrific piece Marion, I truly enjoyed reading this. I also enjoy the rain. 

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Marion

It kinda goes with the territory in UK lol... thanks so much Ian... appreciated x

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Neville

I am not so keen on the rain Your Majesty .. but I do think you made a very good job of dedicating a whole page to it  and the associated imagery was near out of this world .. x

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Marion

Be honest... you just like it when I swear don't you 😃😃. How can you not like the rain Nev??  We don't know anything else in UK lol. Thanks so much my friend x

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Bernadete van d...

It’s bleak, pain, anguish…
and it’s beautiful because it soothes you. You expressed how you feel deliriously well, lady Marion.  B 

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Marion

Do you get much in New Zealand B? I love it which us just as well as UK is just a giant cloud 😁 Thanks so much ... hugs X

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Bernadete van d...

Yes and no. New Zealand has all sorts of weather. One cost rains a lot, the other coast is mostly sunny. Sometimes we have the 4 seasons within days. But,
lots of sunshine. We’re a cold country with lots of mountains   , so again, sun and rain and 
the beautiful 4 seasons. Its a stunning country, in every way. Are you in Wales, Marion? 

   

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Marion

Ah... sounds very familiar except the sunshine bit... 4 seasons in one day 😊😊

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