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The DARK

The DARK

I use to be afraid of The DARK
but then my fears faded 
faded into the dark shadows in the corner and the monsters hidin under my bed.

The DARK isn’t so bad when you seen the worst 
The worst is picturing your worst fears and self destructive insecurities within  
The DARK isn’t so bad if you can only inmagine 
inmagine, dream, plot, your insecurities and worst fears turn them into desire to want to get out to get out the DARK space your forced to see

I use to think of the DARK as my happy place 
only to see the imagines of Love, severity,and the doubts of what can accompany 
The Dark is where you become creative, Spirtual
The Dark brings out your fears how your brain sees things in life 
The Dark showed me the path to Creativity, and that IM THE ONE IN CONTROL HERE . 

 

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Jamie Crawford

Can you subscribe to my bands YouTube channel please?

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al Bikaadi

I liked it, 

I think it could be structured a little more tightly. 

also, I am not sure the caps were needed. I think the reader can feel the buildup and hear that volume without them. 

Hope you aren't offended by my critique. 

Keep up the good work! :D 

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Jordan Townsend

No Not at all I appreciate the time you took to read it and let know things I needed to work on for the next one I publish tonight and my teachers always loved my writing but I always had to make a little adjustments this just makes it better for my Furture of writing !

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Dean Kuch

Very nice, Jordan.
There is much beauty immersed in darkness.
You simply must look a little bit harder to find it.
Can anyone see the glorious twinkling of billions of stars against a velvety, ebony sky in broad daylight?
No, it's just not possible.
For night must be at its darkest hour for the stars to truly shine.
Awesome writing, Poet...
~Dean Kuch♥

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Ella

WOW!! just WOW!! really loved this! 

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