The DARK

I use to be afraid of The DARK
but then my fears faded
faded into the dark shadows in the corner and the monsters hidin under my bed.
The DARK isn’t so bad when you seen the worst
The worst is picturing your worst fears and self destructive insecurities within
The DARK isn’t so bad if you can only inmagine
inmagine, dream, plot, your insecurities and worst fears turn them into desire to want to get out to get out the DARK space your forced to see
I use to think of the DARK as my happy place
only to see the imagines of Love, severity,and the doubts of what can accompany
The Dark is where you become creative, Spirtual
The Dark brings out your fears how your brain sees things in life
The Dark showed me the path to Creativity, and that IM THE ONE IN CONTROL HERE .
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Wow! Fabulous job well done :) I loved it
Thank you !
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Decent write, enjoyed. Well done.
Thank you !
I liked it,
I think it could be structured a little more tightly.
also, I am not sure the caps were needed. I think the reader can feel the buildup and hear that volume without them.
Hope you aren't offended by my critique.
Keep up the good work! :D
No Not at all I appreciate the time you took to read it and let know things I needed to work on for the next one I publish tonight and my teachers always loved my writing but I always had to make a little adjustments this just makes it better for my Furture of writing !
Very nice, Jordan.
There is much beauty immersed in darkness.
You simply must look a little bit harder to find it.
Can anyone see the glorious twinkling of billions of stars against a velvety, ebony sky in broad daylight?
No, it's just not possible.
For night must be at its darkest hour for the stars to truly shine.
Awesome writing, Poet...
~Dean Kuch♥
WOW!! just WOW!! really loved this!