Poem -
The dead
Like 4 Pin it 0There you are
In the great shadows
Hell through the hills
Amidst the twilight
Emerging from the dark
In your cape of dreams
The freak in the unknown
The unknown which seems
So evident in the light
Hidden by the dark
Like a vampire
Squealing for blood
Lest we forget
The dead
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Whoa!! ~ JAI MASTERS!!....... this is most excellently dark my friend.......... the shadows die in the light.......VERY cool !!..........rings so true!!..........ALL STARS............. high fives .........T xo
Thank you for dark reading today
thank you Tony!!
luv Jai :)
I need to remember this when I make up my Halloween anthology.
when is Hallow?
Kimmy you are in time to read
the dark truth!!
Luv from Jai:)
o my gawd, this is real good, Jai....every line lights up like a neon sign, dude this is well composed, you thought this one out well....was this some kind of dream you remember the next day? so vivid....you're writing like a man possessed, these days; enjoying reading you, just saying....cheers, and I should say thanks for posting
I'm
Not thinking
I'm feeling it out;
Possessed I am
No more micro blinking,
Pure insomnia,
Thank you Chris,
When will you visit we can drink to
The dead; we the living still here
Luv from Jai :)
Incredible imagery throughout this as well as the dark ambience of tone you wrote in, loved it. I don't forget the dead, but the dead are better left dead.
The question is, are the dead DEAD or
living elsewhere?
Thank you Devon!!!
Best wishes Jai:)
Thank you Devon; you make a good point!
luv Jai :)
And so do you, very interesting the dead living elsewhere.