Poem -
The Elixir
Between the ebb and flow of fall to winter
I found her in a bottle
That I'd partaken of in a dream
Unwittingly potioned
The elixir of Love's gentle devotion
So, never-more shall I fear
The invitation of a Love
So clearly birthed
Its unrelenting bloom
Shout from lips of Mother Nature herself
So convincingly did my soul
Divine
Her sweetly uncorrupted
Intent
Of Love's deepening quickness
Within the longing
Of my dreaming mind
The point of reference
Beyond its morphing nature
And the light,
I know that she was born for me
Even though
Its sweet elixir,
Has come to me,
So late in life...
Tony Taylor
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Aww Tony this is beautiful. You write so eloquently.
XX Lisa
Too kind ~Thanx DARKLY!!...... appreciate the ink girlfriend...... smiles.......T xo.ย ?
I loved the poem wish I could write as good as you but you probly been writing for years as for me I only been writing since sixth grade. I want to write a book but I am scared to do so
Hey Thanx MATTHEW!!...... you know something?........ one of the cool thing about words is that they give you freedom...... and within that freedom there is no fear...... so you go write that book...... evenย if it's just for yourself...... at least you'll know you've conquered one of your fears.......thanx for this brother poet!!....... smiles.......T xo.ย ?
very nice poetry Tony profound linda
Thanx LINDA!!...... always more than a pleasure my friend....... appreciate the ink sweet poetess!!...... smiles........T xo.ย ?
Beautiful write, Tony. It tells so much in just an instant. And it tells that it's never too late for love, its dream elixir. much love!
Thanx MICHAEL!!........ appreciate you stopping by my friend...... by the way I really liked that poem I commented on earlier....... good stuff....... keep 'em comin' brother!!...... smiles.......T xo.ย ?
"Even though
Its sweet elixir,
Has come to me,
So late in life..."
Behold, a Master Poet spins a seductive web with words.
Hey Thanx KIMMY!!.......I Love that you picked out those particular lines....... always a pleasure brother poet!!....... smiles........T xo. ?
T., so beautiful a write! I particularly liked "Within the longing of my dreaming mind / The point of reference beyond its morphing nature / And the light / I know that she was born for me." Just beautifully written. -Mimi. xx
Hey Thanx C. HARTER AMOS!!...... that was a VERY beautiful comment...... touching on amen of my favorite lines...... very considerate my friend....... appreciate the ink my friend!!......hugs-n-smiles........T xo.ย ย ?
Hi ย Tony Aย beautiful write Iย want to find this elixirย
of love as Iย too get older :-)
The imagery in your piece is stunningย
with original phrasing that tugs at the heartย
Great write my friend Love n hugs Debs xo
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Hey DEBS!!...... you're the coolest of the cool....... and not to worry...... just by reading your writes......I can easily surmise that you WILL indeed ......find precisely what you're looking for........thanx for the ever-support my friend!!.......hugs-n-high fives!!.......T xo.ย ?
The expression in your work of late shows your creative mind is running free to really convey ideas and theories in a dynamic fashion. Another fine piece.
HUG.
Hey SIR WATERS!!...... you're in my head bro!!...... and I SO appreciate the fact that you would care enough to do so!!.......thanx for this.......ย your friend and admirer........T xo.ย ?
Hug.
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
So late in life, but so early in the renaissance of your soul. ย For after all these decades, it has finally found it's other half, the missing piece that evaded you for so long. ย Now, she brings your completion. Your metamorphosis is over. ย You and she are one. ย Finally, together, you will traipse through the elixirs of the Universe.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxxย
Ah dear brother poet LARRY!!...... Love the comment..... but I must say that the metamorphosis is just hitting the pedal......finding its way intoย the overdrive of its expansion into the metaphysical calling......placed there by God so long ago .......and just beginning to find its initial bloom....... granted, Cherie is inspiring in SO many ways...... but God has its impenetrable place in my sense of self!!...... you're the coolest!!.......thanx for this brother poet!!....... your friend and admirer!!....T. xo.ย ?
It's never late...She was born for you and she came at the right...This is very touching Tony...enjoyed