Poem -
The Empty House
Trapped inside this broken globe Β
A flake without a mate Β
No two are ever made the same Β
And life's an icy fate Β
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The little house is empty still Β
And used to all this snow Β
It waits in silence by the trees Β
Until it's time to go Β
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But little hands will hold the pain Β
And make it snow again Β
The house endures another storm Β
And prays that it will end Β
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I sit inside this shattered world Β
And rue that I was built Β
I wasn't made with ample strength Β
To wear this winter quilt.
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Comments
Love it....thank you
Thank you so much, Lorris!! My first comment. I just joined. I really appreciate your kindness, and hope to see you around a lot.Β
Matthew.Β
Mathew, such a lovely write.
Thank you, my awesome friend! This is actually one I like by me, so I greatly appreciate it. It was panned by most people, I think(but they obviously don't have the wonderfully lovely ability to feel sorry for me, and pretend that they like it, like you, and Lorris(but don't tell them I said that)).Β
You're the best!Β
Matthew.Β
Wow...Where were you hiding?!
This is amazing :)
Hi Mitsali,Β
Thank you so much! I'm new here, but I was hidden by my bad poetry, lol.Β
Actually, this is one of mine I actually like, so thank you.Β
Everyone seems really nice here, I'm glad I came on, and look forward to reading your writing, and seeing you around.Β
Thanks again,Β
Matthew.Β
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Yesss!
I love new people who are amazing writers like you!
It makes this place even more interesting than it already is :)
I think of all of us poets as chips of brilliance and no matter how you write you're still awesome
and awe be quiet I've read some of your other poems and I'm liking it :)
Mitsali,Β
Thank you, you're sweet as anything.Β
Matthew.Β
Another Great write Matthew.Β Thanks for sharing.Β DD x
Hey Double D,Β
I'm so sorry I missed your comment, thank you so much! I'm relatively new, so I'm not the best navigator on here yet, but I'm figuring it out.Β
Really appreciate the kind words.Β
And really nice to meet you!Β
Matthew.Β