Poem - 25 November 2017, 16:20 The End Visenya Ashes and dust,ruling the world A throne upon the dead Colorless sounds slowly whirled Papers from books we read Like 4 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 810 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Apocalypse Philosophical Poetry Genre: Drama Listed in: Contest Entries 5 comments
Visenya25 November 2017, 16:22 This is apart of a longer poem, called âPhoenix â  also written  by me Reply
Tony Taylor25 November 2017, 17:50 Hey VISENYA!!....I can see how this might come from "Phoenix"..... for, "From ashes and dust.." rises the Most interesting of characters and beings to rule the world!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......Txo ?â´âĽâ?? Reply
Visenya26 November 2017, 01:11 Thank you for your comment!! Just started on poetry, so I appreciate your feedback very much??? Reply
Nardine Sanderson26 November 2017, 18:36 Short and to the point, I like it Welcome to cosmofunnel Muâââch love nardine :) Reply
Visenya27 November 2017, 06:14 Thank you very much for your comment! It was also my intention for this poem âşď¸âşď¸ Reply
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This is apart of a longer poem, called âPhoenix â  also written  by me
Hey VISENYA!!....I can see how this might come from "Phoenix"..... for, "From ashes and dust.." rises the Most interesting of characters and beings to rule the world!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......Txo ?â´âĽâ??
Thank you for your comment!! Just started on poetry, so I appreciate your feedback very much???
Short and to the point, I like it
Welcome to cosmofunnelÂ
Muâââch love nardine :)
Thank you very much for your comment! It was also my intention for this poem âşď¸âşď¸