" THE FORESTS NIGHT (schwarzwald) "
Darkness comes, a new world arrives
In the forests night
As branches lightly creek, and stillness
Deep into, the forest green
Pine needles creating, a silent bedding
Upon the floor, of the forests needs
So still the pine, so aromatic
Protective of, the changing seasons
One by one, from winter, spring
A brand new birth, upon the breeze
A baby deer, finds mother near
Seeks her comfort
Amid the protective pines
And the silence of the "Schwarzwald"
Where sometimes at night, suddenly
A fire awakens everything,
But then the Mother
Brings forth the rain
And Nature's cry "The right to live!"
Seems a song,
A lullaby,
Where the forests creatures
All feel the appeal,
And the sweet caress
Of the forest night
And its perpetual blanket
Of the warmth
That's here....
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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I like this beautiful poem very much Tony;
its rich imagery and metaphor is
highly creative and a credit to your
writing ability which in my opinion
is a very high publishable one.
best wishes Jai :)
Hey THANX JAI MASTERS!!......... it's interesting that your comment came up just today........... because.........I just packaged up my first two poems to be mailed to the poetry editor at the "The NEW YORKER" magazine............I thought I'd see if my stuff was truly worthy.............thanx SO MUCH for the support my friend.............hugs-n-stuff...................I truly appreciate the time you take you take with my stuff bro............ Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Hello Tony...
It's Amazing!
For days I was trying to come up with a clever write and I kept thinking forest...
I was unable to come up with something that would have worked for me...
I was going to ask you if we could do a Co-write, but something said not yet...
Congratulations in Advance!
Hugz and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Hey Thanx FEATHERS!!!......... Love the comment....... but....... why not?....... we could still do a co-write.......... you know you're one of the few I've EVER done a co-write with!!........thanx so much for the awesome comment sweetheart!!.......... smiles............T xo
Indeed, all forests are enchanted. And if you listen close enough, the trees do speak.
Thanx Jimmy.........I grew up in Germany playing in the "Black Forest" as a child,.......... talk about magical!!..........thanx for this bro!!............ peace...........T xo
Sorry ~ KIMMY!!