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~ THE GARDEN OF EDEN ~

~ THE GARDEN OF EDEN ~

Naked in the lush green of the Garden Of Eden
Just after the breath of life
There was a pause, a holy hesitation, when questions
Wielded with feverish blades of innocence
Questions aimed straight at the heart of man, catastrophic
Changes for femininity, warring, terrified masculinity
Daggers darting straight into obscurity, and possibilities
Rampantly running through the minds of naked warriors`
Wondering what it meant to understand, to be
In the midst of this conflagration
Evil on the outskirts, peering in..... on Eve,
Blindly catching raindrops in her mind, the thunderous
INVITATION
Can you manage this?
The chaos answered her with a plan
Lurking lizards in the playground, creeping closer to the man
Whispering delightful insinuations, sliding ominous laughter
Into his hands, the fruit of mistaken manipulation
The unbreakable charm of
Evil's subtle sweetness in her hands
More than he could taste, or feel,
Or possibly defend, in his innocence
There was heard a hiss, before evil began
The master plan
And in her hands, confusion ran
Adam, (the apple)
"Take a bite of this
And be a man"......

Tony Taylor
* a work in progress

 

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Tony Taylor

Thanx EDDY!!...I hear you won in the contest this month..... I'll go check it out soon bro!!...... stay groovy!!......T xo ?✴❤

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Tony Taylor

Wow!!..... what a cool thing to sayJILL!!.....I don't know if id' go that far but I truly appreciate the sentiment my friend!!..... hugs n smiles......T xo ?✴❤

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Tony Taylor

Thank you SHAWN!!..... so happy to hear from you my friend!!.....VERY much appreciated!!..... stay groovy brother!!...... Peace n Stuff!!......T xo ?✴❤

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

It seems people are still confused of who's responsible between Adam and Eve...

When it read it a little slower, God warned Adam...

Adam didn't warn Eve and he knew better...

Not much difference today how often we ignore God...

It's alright...

He forgives and forgives and forgives...

Imagine if we took absolute care of our Soul...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!

Feathers

 

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Tony Taylor

So true FEATHERS!!.... how often we ignore God..... especially in our personal decisions!!......thanx SO much for all your support and interesting feedback!!...... stay groovy dear poet sister!!...... Peace n Stuff!!...... smiles.......T xo ?✴❤

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sparrowsong

P.S. When God took out his rib and created Eve we aren't told he took his mind too because, he didn't have one of his own to say no...

Hugs again...

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Tony Taylor

Really??....gotta check into this!!..... appreciate it my friend!!..... more smiles!!......T xo ?✴❤

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Larry Ran

My Dear Tony,

He who eats from the "Forbidden Tree"
Will never "The Garden Of Eden" see
But those eschew the serpent's hiss
Will spend forever in eternal bliss

All my love,
Larry xxx

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