The Gifts Of The Pundits

There are some pundits I’d like to write about, that mean so much to me;
That helped me with my initial fears, of writing poetry!
I’d lost my treasured soulmate, and was feeling lots of pain;
Then I found my only solace, was to start to write again!
It had been almost half a century, since I had this constant urge;
But when my heart got torn to pieces, I felt my thoughts converge!
So I renewed my long lost passion, and created several odes;
I was not sure if they were worthy, or I lacked in talents modes!
One day said my dear wife, Linda, that’s my treasured soulmate true;
 ““I’ve found a place to submit your poems, it’s the “cosmofunnel” we’ll send them to””!
I nervously gave her the green light, as I sat with baited breath;
To submit these lines I’d written, I was scared almost to death!
But an epiphany then happened, as three pundits said to me;
““We can see you’re rather new at this, but we “love” your poetry””!
I could not believe the praise they gave me, as if sent from up above;
So Cherie, Tony, and Georgina, you have my dearest love!
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I LOVE the intent of this........ the honesty with which it was written........... the kindness of heart it took to give credit to the three of us when we REALLY did so little!!......... you are naturally gifted writer my friend.......... but what I found so compelling about this........ was the Love between you and your wife........ allowing us to share in just a bit of that part of your life helped me to understand you so much better........I thank you for this............ well done.........PINNED........gotta save this one........... Love and Rockets!!
Hugs, Peace, and Love
To you & LINDA!!
Hi Tony,
What a beautiful letter; you've touched my heart deeply! When I first started submitting poetry to cosmo, I did so with trepidation, however, I had these three VIPs that kept lauding me! As your kind comments began stoking my ego, the pen grew stronger in my hand. You gave me confidence, desire and elation every time I read one! I consider you the Maji.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry