~ The Girl At The End Of The World ~
At the edge of the world, sat a girl
With a wall of faces, in the wash, just off shore
With these mythological seas, teaching, teaching, teaching
Of naivete' unfurled, and a fine blue mist, across the world...
At the bottom of this, sublimely seamless blue mist
Lay hidden, that which, no man could resist
A powerful promise, of pleasure and treasures
A promise, of a perfect, pink blue kiss...
Shall I disguise myself, become one with this misting mist?
Thought the girl who's life force had taken this strange twist,
Perhaps there's a wince, that helps to disguise such instants
Thought the mythological kings and queens, governors and gods,
Perhaps there's a wheel, that simply spins, and spins, on and on...
Just then, at the edge of the world, a bright bubble burst
With insincere blocks of wisdom, and opulent, popping, thirsts
Causing energies promises, of pleasure's treasures
To bring young men screaming, into alternate worlds...
Where universal freedoms, throughout the stars for the cause
Brought the "vanquiship" of light speed, by just drawing out quarks
The "incommunicato", between silent or irrelevant friends
Allowing a cradled balance, of 'All Things', to come to an end...
At the edge of the world, sat a girl, wrapped in swirls
With all of her wisdom, and the pulse of this world
"She were lucky she was."
She wore a gentlemen's perfume, adorned by a single plume
"She were lucky she was."
For the plume it seemed, was her father's last wish
A wish, that she'd no longer glean, as a seamless blue mist...
So she quieted herself, as glorious new energy, burst from her hips
Enfolding the world, with a love never known to exist
Then the world, scratching their heads, thought who is this blue girl
As young men lined up, and yearned, for a perfect, pink and blue kiss
It was this, that concluded, a most magnificent tale
Told by a girl, that sat quietly, at the end of the world...
Tony Taylor
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Tony this is awesome I am totally mystified within your creative imagination so Thank you so much and a worthy pin ❤️💙❤️
Yay!!...Thanx so much JILL!!.....I try to keep up with you my friend!!....Stay groovy girlfriend!!....Smiles......T xo : )
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Great use of words, nice subject and the way it's written just the cherry on top, because I also like some sort of storylike poems.
Sincere
Roy(co)
Cool!!....Thanx ROY!!......I never have gotten a "Cherry On Top" in a comment!!...I appreciate it brother!!......Hugs n Smiles!!.....T xo : )
Hi Tony,
Wow Tony, you nailed it!
Great write.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo
My wife Anne thought it was sublime!
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Yay Thanx TERRY!!...glad you liked it man....and please say thank you to ANNE!!....you guys are the coolest!!.....smiling my friend!!....Lots of Love!!......T xo : )
I love this, it reads like a folk song or sea shanty...so lyrical.
fantastic
:) x
Thank You LORNA!!....I appreciate it sweetheart!!....Hoping all is well with you!!.....Talk soon!!......your friend!!......T xo : )
I love this Tony....its totally unique in imagination and narrative.
What an awesome piece and a great use of original words - vanquiship and a few others!! That's proper talent! Sssoo pinned. Px
Yeah PRATIBHA!!....I DID have a lot of fun messing with new words and timing on this one.....so glad you enjoyed my attempt here dear friend!!.....Lots of Love to to you!!.....Hugs n Smiles!!......T xo : )
Tony a great write and so ethereally well written and hauntingly presented.
Noticed you say work in progress so one and all lucky readers can expect more. Please do, for this was a darned more than good poem that delivers in spades.
Thanks Tony for writing and sharing a touch of poetry class.
Wow!!....what a cool and VERY insightful comment SHAUN!!...I REALLY appreciate when I receive a comment like this when it's truly obvious that the writer has truly comprehended my intent.....makes me feel like I'm really being heard!!.....It's a pleasure having you on this site my friend.....I DO so look forward to your impressions on my stuff brother!!......stay groovy!!......smiles....T xo : )
Hi Tony,
Just an afterthought -
you achieved a great poem without
using an audio or video.
Let's all stay on the same playing field.
Regards,
Terry.
Hey TERRY!!....I like this comment a LOT my friend....but I'm not exactly sure what you meant by the final line ~"Lets all stay on the same playing field!!"......Please...can you enlighten me my friend.....Look forward to it!!......Peace n Stuff!!.......T xo : )
HOLY COW W.D.!!....your comments of late have been truly inspirational....I'm gonna have to send you a P.M. to express just how much they have affected me....you are such a kind, insightful, and VERY intelligent soul.... who has such a love of poetry that I think this entire site benefits from your presence.......Thank You SO much dear poet sister!!....you're awesome!!.....HUGS n Smiles!!....your friend and admirer......T xo : )
Ohh Tony you have me blushing like a school girl...I find your work amazing and this piece...well I just couldn't help myself but reread again and again.
CAN'T wait to see what you come up with next!!
Thank you for everything Tony... your reply has made my day brighter.
Love&Hugs,
W.D