Poem -
The girl in the Mirror
The girl in the mirror,
look at me and smile,
"He will never want you" She says,
I try to speak but the words won't come out,
all i can do is cry,
she right"
He would never want a girl that has,
Dull eyes,
Fake smile,
Bruise wrists,
Broken Heart.
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Comments
Always proofread your work aloud... I did notice a small error... after the paragraph "all i can do is cries, she right"
it would sound best as "all i can do is cry, she's right"
I am not being critical only trying to help, you are free to write how you feel.Β
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