~ THE GLITTERING SEED ~
{my ever--evolving pain}
The fantabulous feeling that sets a steady course
Through my current vibration
Is glittering with gregarious emotions
Of excitement and illumination
The search for my independence
Is approaching the high end of possibilities
And even though my pain is constant
Hope's horizon dulls them into trivialities
Making brighter my potential for freedom
Of thought and freedom of choices
Which I have been missing for so long
That I want to dance and make happy noises
So that my joy at God's kindness
Is brought to the foreground as fate
Where the spotlight shines so brightly
That I feel like I have a date
With the God I see in my dreams
Who teaches that my elation
Is coming from a spiritual place
Where all of time and space
Is folded into a golden seed
Where I water
And I focus on
My hopes and dreams....
Tony Taylor.
Comments
Hi Tony, what an enchanting write. I felt myself getting pulled into its essence as your choice of words made this piece stand out. Great job🙏🙏
Thank you most kindly SUSAN!!...... you are the enchanting one dear poet sister!!...... stay groovy...... and please.... keep checking me out...I will do the same as best I can!!....... which is usually in intervals!! (smiles)......thanx again!!.......T xo. : )
Hey T....Living with pain is not fun, and it is pretty amazing that you rise above it with your focus on the potential of man's spirit and God's blessings. You hold onto hope and seek those things that deliver you into a higher conscience than the restrictions of life from pain. I find that inspiring. This flows well with the rhyming and vowel sounds that complement as read. You are so good at doing that and still keeping the creativity of your theme intact as well. That is pretty awesome. Love n Hugs, C xo
Wow... .there is a great sense of gratitude and elation in this verse that reached through to me...the reader, lovely read 💕
Thank you MARION!!... if it did indeed reach out and touch you then you can understand the pain my body endures each day and there id nothing more I can possibly hope to accomplish with these words!!......thanx again my friend!!..... Hugs........T xo. : )
Awwww Amazing Tony as always ❤️
NOOOO....you're the amazing one dear poet sister.... thank you so much for the continued support of my work!!........ big smiles..........T xo. : )
thanx so much for the Vote & Like Merrill!!...... Very much appreciate that you're reading brother!!........ later........T xo. : )
"glittering with gregarious emotions" WOW!!! How fresh and apt. I will always carry that line around. Pinned it