Poem -
The Grandest Lie
How strange it is
That since you died
It is I
Who feels unsafe
Unsteady
On a pointless rock
Rotating
In deep space
For I've discovered that
There is no sky
Just clouds that mask
The Grandest Lie
And when they open
There is nothing there
No god, no angel,
no white stair
Just spaceĀ
Just space
Just space
M P 10/8/21
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Wow super cool.Ā
Thanks Liliana x
And what a lie it is too!Ā These lines flow so well and illustrate theĀ perfect volta (turning point) to this poem. Brilliant as always x
I find it quite frightening to know we are separated from deep icy space by only a thin layer of atmosphere Tina...course that's not what this is about but it's true...there is no sky...not rely...hugs Xx
an excellent revelation revealed and poemed perfectly my friend .. :)
Thankyou Neville, appreciated x