Poem -

The Ideas

Tarin McDaniel~03/15/2017

The Ideas

Devious desires dance happily
Amongst my cluttered dreams.
Contaminating my sanity,
With the devilish ideas they bring. 

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Tony Taylor

Hello TARIN!!......these words seem to be observations......self reflective manifestations of a part of the self that most of us carry and sometimes struggle with.....Good vs, Evil if you will....but it is in the succinctness of your poetic delivery that give them power!!......ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet sister.....and.....in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Tarin McDaniel

Hey Tony,
    Thank You so very much for your kind comments. And you are very much correct about The self reflective observations. Pretty much everything I write, or have so far, is an expression of what is going on in my little world at the moment. Poetry has, all to often been, the only source of communication and outlet for some of the darkest times I've ever endured.
My journey has been up hill both ways but has left me with vast knowledge and an incredibly deep understanding of more than I ever wanted to know or understand. 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

great write! welcome to Cosmo!........................................................................Jim

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Tarin McDaniel

Thank you, Kindly.
And I am definitely enjoying my time here so far. Thanks to all the great folks 
I've had the pleasure of chatting with, thus far. 
 

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Gwendoline

Hello Tarin, I love a good short power poem. This is exactly that. In a small amount of words you have captured that internal battle so many of us reflect upon. A great write indeed and welcome to cosmo 
Gwen x 

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Neville

Must be the way my mind works ... Someone other than just me must surely be blushing ..

Welcome & All Good Things,

Neville :)

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