Poem -

The Internal Sacrifice

There is a primitive need
for the glory and the greed,
for the seed and the root,
for the faith and the fruit.
Ā 

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Dean Kuch

Short, sweet, true, and to the point.
A tiny poem which says a lot in very few words.
Excellent, Erin.
Bravo!
~DeanĀ  :}

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Erin Green

Thank you. I really like short poems that contain a whole world within them. It just makes sense. It's about the ultimate struggle of humankind.

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Dean Kuch

Yeah, me too.
However, I like, read and enjoy ALL types of poetry.
Happy Easter, Erin.
~Dean ☠

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Erin Green

Happy Easter to you too! Hope it's a good one.Ā 

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Tony Taylor

Succinctly powerful dear poet sister!!...... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo

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Erin Green

Thank you Tony! It is indeed a powerful poem and one that really describes the human struggle. May you prosper just the same.Ā 

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Rosy Christensen

Needy fruit great poem but the greedy one here looks like shell need a beer every minute of every year hah this poems great like to see more of this style.

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Erin Green

Oh my God, I love your comment. You speak the truth! Ha Ha. I don't drink beer but wine will do just fine. Holy wine is kind of fitting for the poetry...yeah, gotta get me some of that.Ā 

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