Poem -

THE INVITATION

THE INVITATION

The special invitation is the ticket in...

It's just a mystery game...

ENTER IF YOU DARE!

Everyone is a character...

This mystery is to confuse the well minded...

Waiting in a room...

Take hold of his arm...

There is six guests sitting at the round table...

Candles are lit...

Soft music playing from the speakers in the walls...

Through the silence a voice appears...

Everyone is accounted for?

A candle goes out...

One by one there's a tap on the shoulder...

People stand to their feet and exits...

One person is left and one candle is burning...

There's a tap on the shoulder...

The candle went out...

The music stopped...

You don't move a single step...

Lights come on...

You find yourself in another room...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Tony Taylor

Whoa FEATHERS!!........ enigmatically infringing  my friend!!...... so how do you join the game?......I wanna play........you know I Love a good mystery!!...... smiles....... cool pic too!!....... smiles..:...T xo.  ?

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sparrowsong

Hello Lisa...

Glad you enjoyed and found it a little mysterious...

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

You RSVP'D...

It's all good...

I can't give it all away...

The instructions will be given at the time of entering...

The only thing I will tell you is being tapped on the shoulder...

Last...

Let the fun begin!

Glad you enjoyed! 

Hugz and Smiles! 

Feathers 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

I will tell you the selection is completely random and you don't know when it's coming...

If the thought gives you goosebumps...

You know you have to join...

What good is the unnerving build-up if you can't release it?

That's the greatest thing about a mystery game...

You're not scared...

Are you?

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sis Sparrowsong Very intriguing A seance comes to mind 
when reading this 
I enjoyed your mysterious ghostly write 
Hugs Debs 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

LOL!

It's strange really with what was in my mind wasn't a seance which is actually good...

It left me open for another opportunity to write about...

Thank you very much for your comment...

Glad you enjoyed! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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C. Harter Amos

Spine chilling game you have here.  Not so sure I'm up to the fright level it would cause! Enjoyed the read. -Mimi. xx

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sparrowsong

Hello Mimi...

I am sure you would fine...

It's not like you would be alone...

Right?

Glad you enjoyed! 

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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The Bee

You can't beat a good mystery, dark room and all, I love a dark mysterious room xo :-)

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sparrowsong

Hello Bee...

My kids used to love to be scared...

I would pull little things on them sometimes,  and I would make scary noises and they would run onto their beds and grab their blankets and try and hide...

I would pretend I didn't know where they were...

I would hide around the corner...

I would hear one of them say to the other one...

The coast is clear...

They would tip toe out of their room in their pajamas and...

I would say...

Boo!

And grab one of them and it would start all over again...

Then came the...

Break!

Gotta pee Mommy...

Good Times!

Glad you enjoyed! 

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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The Bee

Sounds like a lot of fun, Sparrow. I'm glad you wrote this one.

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sparrowsong

Hello Bee...

It was a lot of fun...

When we would lose power in a storm at night...

At first it was...

Mom!

I didn't do it that time...

LOL!

Then I would really have a lot of fun with them...

Glad you enjoyed! 

Thanks again...

Hugs :)

sparrowsong 

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Larry Ran

Hi Sweet Sparrowsong,

I accept the invitation

I want my mind challenged

I join hands with my soon to be quintet

I see others, tapped on their shoulders

Finally, I am the last one standing

The tap then comes to my shoulder

The candle dies, but I refuse to move

Then the lights come back on

And I, the new leader of the pack, stand in a new room

Ready to select the new special players

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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sparrowsong

Hello Larry...

Thank you for attending...

Someone tapped your shoulder...

Who was it?

Everyone has been accounted for...

I hope you come back and visit again...

Glad you enjoyed! 

Thank you for your comment and support! 

Hugs, Peace and Love 

sparrowsong 

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