Poem -
The Jellyfish
An ode to a flashing bluetooth speaker
Forever altering acid rain
All the pleasure without the pain
Lysergic acid tattooing the brain
Gods beautiful pulsating gift
Dope Lemon & The Psychic IllsÂ
Pure emotion, neon thrills
Glowing gold like daffodilsÂ
I air guitar a Hendrix riff
The Jellyfish is the centre pieceÂ
If there was war she would be peaceÂ
Out of her book I take a leafÂ
Jettison paddles and slowly drift
Aching cheeks and racing thoughtsÂ
Jason and the fucking ArgonautsÂ
Amid the chaos thoughts pause...
Is life genuine or counterfeit?
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Comments
Great write , love the lines and deepness , definitely looking forward to more ?âď¸
Thank you so much Phare Away. That's how I felt at the time...Phare Away .?
An ode to a Bluetooth speaker... I think only you could do this justice, Syd! And you've written it soooo well! I love the psychedelic feel this has. You've done brilliantly here
That was my favourite bit of the poem. The colours, the movement, the moment captured perfectly x
Thank you for reading and your awesome comment. This is a true story by the way. I always appreciate your feedback.
Take care - Syd x
Hey Syd I really think you should introduce me to your man.Â
NigelÂ
Ha ha! My man is very hard to get hold of Nigel. Thanks for the comment and pin. Really appreciate it, glad you enjoyed this one.
- SydÂ
Hi Syd, I really like how you use your terminology in this poem! It makes it seem so full and flowing, just an amazing write. I hope to see more from you in the future! All the Best, The Fish of the Sea.
Thank you so much for your very kind comment. I really didn't want to use the F word in this poem but it just fits and flows really well. I'm glad you weren't put off by the bad language or subject.Â
Much appreciated - SydÂ
Good job! đ
Thanks Pen.
Once again...apologies for the jate reply.
- SydÂ