Poem -

THE KISS

Never in his life had he kissed a girl before 
How to do it he wasn't really quite sure 
You can't have lessons in just how to kiss
Just have to hope it will turn out to be bliss

Tonight is the night when the kiss will occur
Romantic notions in him will definitely stir
For kissing this girl he must do it so right 
Will be the perfect end to a perfect night 

A delightful meal came to its conclusion 
Would a kiss be part of the inclusion ?
The answer was yes and turned out so well
So much so they booked into a hotel 

What happened at the hotel I cannot say 
Both were not seen until the very next day 
I'm sure kissing may have taken place 
Judging by the look on each other's face

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Audrey youde

So happy for you ,hope she treats you right this time 

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The fish of the sea

I actually really wanted to comment on this one Kieran, just never got round to it. I really like the perspective of this write, it doesn't focus on one side of the story and reads as if a narrator is talking. The theme is spot on for your unique writing style. I enjoyed it a lot. Brilliant work. Best wishes to you Kieran. TFOTS

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