The Little Bird.

I found a little songbird
lying wounded on the ground,
i picked him up held him close,Â
listening for a sound.
His tiny eyes they opened
such haunted eyes were they,
a tear it spilled so softly
and then I heard him say.
i used to love a lovely girl
but my love it was in vain,
for her I'd fly to the end of time
and all the way back again.
But she was taken from me
by one who cannot sing,
her love she gives him freely
our past means not a thing.
So if you see this lovely girl
there's a thing I'd like to know,
how come she shot the nightingale...
then married a fucking crow!
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LOL Â that ending just comes from nowhere...a nice surprise :)
Cheers Angel, I'm just finding my way round the site... it was suppose to be in separate verses! lolÂ
Yeah same here still newish, seems when I use a mobile the stanzas dissappear but it's OK on a tablet..well android anyways the fire don't like me Ipad either :-/
LOL ~ is right........the ending definitely made me laugh out loud..........great sense of rhythm and timing here...........very compelling read Coldwater..........well done.........ALL STARS............T xo
Cheers Tony, pleased you enjoyed! Thanks for stars and the comment.
Coldwater very good write, I had to check this one out after reading the comments and this ending they spoke of, lol....yes indeed, it is funny....enjoyed the experience