Poem -

The Little Bird.

I found a little songbird

lying wounded on the ground,

i picked him up held him close, 

listening for a sound.

His tiny eyes they opened

such haunted eyes were they,

a tear it spilled so softly

and then I heard him say.

i used to love a lovely girl

but my love it was in vain,

for her I'd fly to the end of time

and all the way back again.

But she was taken from me

by one who cannot sing,

her love she gives him freely

our past means not a thing.

So if you see this lovely girl

there's a thing I'd like to know,

how come she shot the nightingale...

then married a fucking crow!

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Twisted Angel

LOL  that ending just comes from nowhere...a nice surprise :)

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Coldwater

Cheers Angel, I'm just finding my way round the site... it was suppose to be in separate verses! lol 

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Twisted Angel

Yeah same here still newish, seems when I use a mobile the stanzas dissappear but it's OK on a tablet..well android anyways the fire don't like me Ipad either :-/

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Tony Taylor

LOL ~ is right........the ending definitely made me laugh out loud..........great sense of rhythm and timing here...........very compelling read Coldwater..........well done.........ALL STARS............T xo

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Coldwater

Cheers Tony, pleased you enjoyed! Thanks for stars and the comment.

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Christopher Correia

Coldwater very good write, I had to check this one out after reading the comments and this ending they spoke of, lol....yes indeed, it is funny....enjoyed the experience

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