Poem -
The Look of Love
The look in your eyes
Oh! I love the most
So soft as morning light
melting into a smile
I bid you stay with me awhile.
Through your eyes
I see so much truth
You want to rekindle heat
But inside your ' tears in silence '
Sound of sirens
To win my confidence.
So, let's take this chance
Waltz with me on this sudden dance
Under the rainy spell
let's hold umbrella together
Keep us dry
Say you'll stay
Don't ever go
I need your reply.
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Wow! I love how you based your poem on a musical piece without just repeating the words in the piece. Beautiful <3
Thank you. I'm trying to accompany my line dances and songs with poems. Actually, I haven't been singing nor dancing since college, all these just came out of the blue.
But, I did sing only at school, with my friends , and at home. I used to join singing, dancing, acting, declamation contest in High School.
I'm just enjoying my time as a retired public servant.
Thats really cool, my first year of high school is coming up.
wonderful song
Thank you.
You’re so welcome
YAY LEAH!!......so nice to see you on the pages again!!......and with such a loving and powerfully romantic piece to share......with its musical foundation highlighting the whole!!......I hope this is Non-fiction and that you are finding happiness my friend!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Ps. I enjoyed hearing you sing too!!......You GO GIRL!!.....smiles!!
Hi Tony,
thank you.... it's nice to be back where I belong...This is fiction LOL.
A lovely sweet poem imaginative romantic feelings wow!! I liked the umbrella lines. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you; yes, I love the umbrella as a metaphor.
sure, I'll visit your page.
Ahh I love this Leah
x
Thank you Lorna; need more practice in singing though. LOL