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THE MAN JUST CARRIES ON

THE MAN JUST CARRIES ON

A little girl doesn't understand why a man has hurt her...

She is pregnant and she is forced to become his wife and has five children by the age of sixteen...

He leaves her for another...

She's much to old for him now...

She had to turn eighteen and she can't go home...

It's her fault, somehow...

She has to provide for her children...

Surely, there's another man that would treat her the same...

Bruised for life inside and out...

The man just carries on...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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James unsworth

May god heal there pain that they go through on this wicked land called earth, no one should EVER be treated like this, its not right its just not right ?

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Jai Masters

Just horrible to read of thisΒ 
Β Β  The song is greatΒ 
is this a well know singer?Β 
I enjoy the words.Β 
Β Β  To sparrowΒ 
luv from Jjai:))Β 

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Tony Taylor

WOW!!..... stunningly powerful write FEATHERS!!... wow!..... no words..... just sadness!!...... tons-O-stars!!......T xo ???β™₯β™₯

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sparrowsong

Hello James...

So much goes on with young girls and twisted beliefs...

That's only one scenario...

Thank you for your comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello L. Barto...

Thank you for being there!

Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Tina...

Some places it's their way of life, do it or get beaten...

Not everywhere required a marriage and not everywhere it's a crime...

Rapists would have it made if they would simply relocate...

Thank you for your sweet comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Jai...

It's a terrible reality...

Yes, Kenny Chesney...

He's an American Country Singer/Songwriter and Music Producer...

14 out of his 20 songs have reached Gold or higher..Β 

I hope he's not mad I shared this...

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Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong
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sparrowsong

Hello β™₯ ????????????? β™₯

To some it's sad to others a victory...

Depends whether it's considered evil or not...

Also, which side says which...

Thank you for your comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

Thank you for your kind comment my poet brother...

Hugz and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!

Feathers

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

It actually does happen...

They really do become Husband and Wife...

I heard recently they're considering making it legal for anyone who is sixteen to be able to marry without permission in this Country...

I couldn't believe it...

So many things are so messed up already...

How can we go faster into the pit is the plan I'm seeing...

Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Love n Hugs

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Thank you very much for your kind comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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BumbleBea

Wow just wow!!! The emotion poured into this is so profound I can feel the confusion and the abandonment. I have read many of your works but this is one of my favourites. I particularly like the ambiguity in the line 'the man just carries on'. Phenomenal my friend! Bea x

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sparrowsong

Hello Bea...

Thank you very much for your kind words my friend...

Such a generous compliment...

Best wishes and blessings!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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