The misery of you

then my thoughts
of happy days
and my soul
begins to tell
of our enlightening times
and wonderous mind
and you became a fool....
to judge
So I walk
on white sandy beaches
from an island of music ...fun in the sun
leaving foot prints
of love on the sand
yet this memory
back washed
to the sea
in lost of time
and you will never understand
a land of life
then a drop of water fell again
on petals red
and colours dread
In your pounder
with burning skin and more
you wonder
then we smile
to the elements
of love
but you could not understand
as the wind blew
a tear drop fell again
on water springs of joy
in the misery of you....
you mumble on insanity
I lived and continue to love.
at sixty four now.
I will love.
Again and over you.
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So ..lol.....only once
Dear Lorris Morris,
This is a beautiful work, created by a sad heart, that sheds teardrops into the sea.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry
Hello,
Good poem.
One suggestion:
In your second stanza, 'to judge' feels out of place.
Like the way you form your words, for example, 'on petals red', and 'in lost of time'. Beautiful.
Take care,
Rasmine