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The picturesque postcard 💙

The picturesque postcard 💙

She shivered as her silhouette stood, shadowing on the shimmering snow

From the luminous moonlight effervescent glow

Shining and sparkling all around below

And those spectacular  starry skies up above her, put on a sensational show..

There was something special in the air on that cold December night

As that whiteout of snow made everything bright

But she stood steadfast in her perilous plight

Battling against the sub zero temperatures with all her might..

She had decided to take a moonlit stroll 

When the heavens had opened their heart and soul

With winters wrath from the north Arctic pole

And she was stuck in this barbaric blizzard, feeling foolish on the whole..

Whilst the wild wicked wind blew all that snow around

With an eerie wailing, whistling, sound

As she watched snow drifts pile up on the ground

But Oh this perfect picturesque postcard, seasonal scenery, had her so spellbound…

 

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! JILL!!....First ~what a great title for a poem......Second ~ In my most humble opinion......this is one your very best writes......when you consider what it takes to write 'In the moment' (as you do).....or improvisationally.......this has stunning continuity.....and FANTASTIC alliterative phrasing running throughout.......PINNED!!.....truly a pleasure to read!!........Bravo!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......your friend and admirer!!.....T xo  : )

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Jill Tait

Awww Thanks so much Tony I am truly humbled and honoured ❤️🌹❤️

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