Poem -
The Poem Thats Now A Song
- A poem I promised, that I never got to writing It down, and now It's much too late as lay flowers on your grave
- I speak to you of a poem I finally wrote, not quite the poem I'd planned, for knew not that you were dyingÂ
- But the poem has now become a song dedicated to you, and there will always be a place in time for you my darling
- I feel a great weight lifted from me, for the poem that's now a song and I kept my promise to you
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Comments
Hello Johnny...
Welcome to Cosmo!
This is very beautiful and sad indeed!
I'm happy you made this into a song...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hey JOHNNY!!.....I have a lifelong friend who has been dealing with dyslexia his whole life.....I could automatically see the intent in your lines/correct the details as I read along........this is a beautiful write ~
         ~ "A poem I promised, that I never got to writing down,
             and now it's much too late, as I lay flowers upon your grave..."
The feeling created here is a contagious melancholy.......ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet brother!!......and.........WELCOME to COSMO!!........I am so sorry for your loss!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴❤✴?
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So very sad. I feel your pain. Keep smiling hun x