~ The Promise Of Perfection ~
There is a quiet in her face
Where a heavenly paradise resides
A magical garden, is that place
Wherein, all calm, all love, coincide
There, the promise of perfection, grows
Through eyes that hold what only love knows
Those soft moments one can't explain
Those fleeting looks that hang in the air
Which causes smiles, hard to contain
Quickly covered with a toss of her hair
Yet, as the promise of perfection, grows
It drives a solitary man, to quietly compose...
With words that show the heart of her
And phrases that explode upon the page
Her poetry becomes the purity of splendor
Her radiance, becomes legend, for any age
And so, the promise of perfection, is attained
And then,
"My heart is hers, and there, shall forever remain!"...
Tony Taylor
* This is dedicated
To,
The most beautiful person
In my entire
Life...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY P!!
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Tony wonderful poem
who birthday is it
if you dont mind my asking
Hey, Thanx GREG!!.......She's the new love in my life.......no one who's name you know my friend......but thank you for asking....I'm sure, at some point I'll post a poem with her picture on it.....I'll let you know when I do!!.....thanx again for the kind words brother!!.....stay groovy!!......T xo : )
i am so happy for you
i cant wait for that poem
Send that someone you love, a happy birthday from me.
Have a great time together.
Thank you LILIANA!!...and I will!!......hugs n smiles......T xo : )
Hi Tony,
Got your message.
I enjoyed your poem - I seem to
have been in love most of my life,
sometimes cosmetically,
sometimes truly.
Your poem is a reflection of the latter
and comes shining through - you caught
everything there was to catch.
Keep well and safe.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
A double thank you TERRY.....for responding to my message and for sharing as you have here......what does "Cosmetically" mean in this context??....you threw me a curve there!!.....regardless, I am grateful dear poet brother!!....I appreciate your impressions kind sir!!......smiles......T xo : )
Hi Tony,
'Cosmetically' = not really!
Terry.
Hi Tony,
My wife, Anne, also thinks
that you achieved a great calmness
and serenity of the inner soul.
Love,
A & Terry.
xxx
Oh...and MANY thanx to ANNE for her impressions and for her VERY insightful commentary......Please give her a hug for me and tell her that she has touched upon that which I was attempting convey perfectly!!......Lots of Love to you and yours!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Thanks so much Sir Tony.
Love,
Terry & Anne.
xoxo :}
Well, well, well, now........... Tony
This is most bitter sweet, and lovely
I am happy for you, az the words tell it all, your affection is so sincere and tender
Kind of brought tears to my eyes, okay, it did
Not becauze I have those feelings for anyone, but today is my only childs birthday, and he is 21 today. In the Marines, well later I will dedicate a poem to him. Happy Birthday to your friend, and best wishes to both of you
Nancy
Oh wow!!.....that IS a bit of a happy coincidence.....Please a a belated Happy Birthday to your son!!.....21 ~ That's a Big one.....and a Marine!!....Impressive!!......you must be very proud and a little sad at the same time.....as he is at that time when leaving the home is finalizing itself!!......Anyway, I am so happy that you took the time to comment on this one......I wanted your impressions very much Nancy as I don't seem to run into you very often!!....I am so glad you liked it ....and I hope to continue reading your stuff......glad you're back on the pages now!!....sending lots of love to you and yours!!......smiles.......T xo : )
Wow! This is something new; short and concise.. Words come easy when one is honest.. " Her radiance becomes legend for any age"
and so, the promise of perfection is attained.
My favorite lines..
I'm happy for you Tony.. Happy Birthday to your poet friend.
I like the title ' promise of perfection'
Glad not ' in pursuit of perfection ' for there is no such thing as perfect...it's within us....
When I sing high notes without strain...
that's when I attain my promise of perfection LOL.
Stellar write..
Big Smiles!!......I know how it feels to hit the notes at the top of one's range when delivering a song.....I've been doing it a long time as well.....I enjoyed your song LEAH and I'm looking forward to your You Tube channel too....thanx so much for the 'way kind' commentary dear poet sister.....Like Nancy, I am so very happy to see you back on the pages.......Hello to your daughter and thanx again for being cool girlfriend!!......Glide On Love!!.....T xo : )
You're always welcome my poet friend
Sheer Brilliance Tony ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thank you JILL!!....High praise coming from you!!......thanx for making me smile dear poet sister!!.......I appreciate it VERY much!!......your friend and ever-admirer.....T xo : )
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Tony, this is such a delightful read. Your heart shines in every word. We all seek happiness. Your poetry radiates such warmth. You have captured that which we all long to treasure. As ever you have penned to perfection the powers of the heart, and what it can force our eyes to see. The beauty in another. And your beauty illuminates off this here page
Your friend Gwen x