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The Red Kite

The Red Kite

The Red Kite

Looking skywards, a shadow appears, it gets closer, I fix my eyes
Against the blue vale of sky I clearly see her, I trace her as she flys.

Gliding gracefully upon the thermals, she effortlessly enjoys
Her russet body, the black & white wings beautifully poised.

Her primary feathered wings looking like dark fingers, gently fluttering 
Catching the wind, the gentle wing movements assist as she's hovering.

I see her tail, like a swallows, deeply forked and twisting 
Her beady eyes catch mine, we hold our gaze, unresisting. 

Her yellow bill, standing out against her pale grey head
It's aerodynamic curve catching the sunlight ahead.

I revel at her beauty, once nearly extinct from our skies
What an honour to see her flying above me and hearing her cries.

Some persecuted her, seeing her as vermin and of killing game
But the reintroduction of this bird means I can appreciate her once again.

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Kimmy Alan

Hunters should appreciate the presence of a predator such as this.   The reason is simple, like them, the kite is a hunter as well.

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Tracey Goundrill

Thank you Kimmy, I couldn't agree more. Nature is so wonderful, in all its many varied forms. Thank you for reading it and taking the time to comment:) it's the first poem I've ever written. 

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Holloway

Hi Tracey,

Beautifully written, if thats your first effort then I really look forward to reading more of your words!

All the best

Holloway

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Tracey Goundrill

Thank you so much for your appreciation Holloway. Yes, I feel more than inadequate amongst such amazing talented poets. I'm beyond shocked that my poem has been even been nominated, let alone read :) 

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Tony Owen

Hi Tracey. Thank you for sharing this image provoking poem of a very beautiful bird that thankfully has been re-introduced into some parts of the UK and is thriving. Beautifully crafted and written. I am new to this site and have uploaded a poem about a Red Kite too. Thank you for your touching poem that brings back fond memories of watching this incredible bird. 

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Tracey Goundrill

Hi Tony. Welcome to Cosmo! I hope it’s as welcoming & as inspiring to you as it has been to me. & thank you for your kind appreciation of my poem. They are truly wonderful raptors. I miss seeing them every day. 

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Tony Owen

Hi Tracey. Thank you for your warm welcome to Cosmo. With writers such as yourself offering support and positive feedback, I am sure I will find the site welcoming and inspiring. How exciting that such talented people are commenting on my literary efforts and sharing their beautiful poems. Thank you!!

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