Poem -

The River

All of a sudden my world turn dark and everything was gone

I was standing on the face of the earth searching for the dawn

There was nothing all around me. Nothing that I could find

There were no dreams of tomorrow, and no dreams of time

A lonely river, so sweet, was all that can be found

A lonely river no more, because in that river I drowned...

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Christopher Correia

good write, Patricia, with a very stark setting, then the twist at the end pumped in some dramatic flare, you constructed this very well, held the reader....cool poem, and welcome, looking forward to reading you again and this time I'll be ready for the unexpected, D....cheers poet 

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