Poem -

The Sea

The Sea

Water fell
I want 
Him
Slip down
My love
Cold
Take me
Rushing
Falling
Under the
Swell
Burn
For 
You
Rocks smash
Blue white
Caps
Under there
Where you are
The sky blue
My lover
I cry
No more 
Sea and I 
I will 
Drown 
My love
Will
Not return
Oh beloved 
Blue sea
Take
Me

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jullianne

Oh thank you so much very appreciated and very grateful for your feedback ???

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Christopher Correia

this is lovely, jullianne, emotive, tender....your sea imagery works well, took the reader to a place of surrender, letting go...this poem evokes a tranquil tone that I celebrate, I really enjoyed the scaled down format that captured the essence of your theme so well, beautiful writing, poet

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jullianne

Thank you so much it means a lot to me that you like and appreciate what I write. Again thank you  ...???

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author
Lost

Excellent. Painful, emotive. Great write

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author
jullianne

thanks hun I appreciate it so much ???

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