Poem -
The Sea
Water fell
I want
Him
Slip down
My love
Cold
Take me
Rushing
Falling
Under the
Swell
Burn
For
You
Rocks smash
Blue white
Caps
Under there
Where you are
The sky blue
My lover
I cry
No more
Sea and I
I will
Drown
My love
Will
Not return
Oh beloved
Blue sea
Take
Me
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Oh thank you so much very appreciated and very grateful for your feedback ???
<3 or rather </3...
English love
this is lovely, jullianne, emotive, tender....your sea imagery works well, took the reader to a place of surrender, letting go...this poem evokes a tranquil tone that I celebrate, I really enjoyed the scaled down format that captured the essence of your theme so well, beautiful writing, poet
Thank you so much it means a lot to me that you like and appreciate what I write. Again thank you ...???
Excellent. Painful, emotive. Great write
thanks hun I appreciate it so much ???