Poem -
A SHIP
The ship went down suddenly
Suddenly
And without warning
There was no fuss
And no dawning
It just sunk
The ship went down whole
In an instant
Disappearing
In an instant
Under waves
Into caves
Of deep water
There were no survivors
Everything died
There was no salvage
None could be found
There is no hope
Everyone drowned
With the ship
M P 18/11/21
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Wonderful Poems loved it
Thanks so much Greg x
STUNNINGLY Bleak!!.....Powerfully dark!!.....Love the use of repetition here to accent and add profundity.....BEAUTIFULLY crafted poetry MARION!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......Bravo dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo : )
Yay!! Bleak is good...bleak is brilliant😊 thanks Tony x
Life can feel like a sinking ship. I loved the narrative of this piece and can only echo what Tony already said. Beautifully bleak my friend xx
Thanks love ❤
Stunning dark piece which reads beautifully like the others said. I love your short poetry. Thanks for sharing. Pxxx
Thanks so much P 💖