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The Star of Enelyë (Continue from Iron Angel)

The Star of Enelyë (Continue from Iron Angel)

As the morning set its waves upon my dreaming sail, 
I was warm, cold no more, the angel faded into the fog. 
The eerie sun, blue as the ocean`s rain, rose upon the winter`s scent,
I still played into the stream as the night came upon the wind,
Shining stars before my eyes, all glowing over the loss of time,
My journey grown with heave, but no end followed,
As I danced into the woods, a warm place became my hold,
An elven lady of the moon, came across my lonely route,
Took me into her arms, guard me from the vile night,

The strong sense of this winter fades,
Her eyes reckon mine, searching for a star and hope,
But I`m lost, the dark beckons me, slowly drawing near,
She sensed me sleeping, as I fall,
She touched my hands, I sensed her warm ,
Her flawless star fell upon me, as the sordid winds became my dream.

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Dmitri Rudder

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS! This poem uses all the imagery I would have used but better, and a deep; ponderous feeling of introspection. This is an Amazing masterpeice.

Standing Ovation -Dmitri R.

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Xiǎo Jiàn

Thank you very much Dimitri I am very happy you enjoyed reading it :)

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Christopher Correia

yeah, Goldie, this is quite good....total control of tempo and yes imagery is stunning, you don't rhyme much but it feels like you do, so smooth and organic is the flow and yawsa! what a tone you carry, you weave words sweetly, Goldie....enjoyed...this is a solid poem, well done, thanks for posting, 

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Xiǎo Jiàn

Aww thank you very much Christopher :) I am so glad you liked it, at the moment I am at work but surely I will read your work to :)

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Tony Taylor

Most excellent!!........ you're a natural............ smiles............T xo

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