The Temple Garden Of Blooming Ideas.."
There are a vast number
of intricate possibilities
invading my cranium...
A moving vision of volatile,
destructive perceptions,
and aging geraniums..
Like a temple garden
of elusively blooming ideas
and absurdities...
Creating fluidity inside of me
like a new age thesaurus
herding each word in me...
Explosions of images
and graphic new languages
speaking nonsensically...
But making perfections
of ruthless reflections
in memories and destinies...
Coming to incongruous,
conclusive opinions,
on atrocious abnormalities...
And irreverent sermons
from pretentious preachers
and Vatican's priests and saints...
Who pray on the front steps
of government buildings
with well planned restraints...
Tackling the issues
of future events
and impossible predictions...
While taking their time
loosing and stretching
their collaborative convictions...
To really say nothing at all
While preparing us all
For that which will help them
Maintain and perpetually win
Invisible power
With predetermined hallucinations...
Tony Taylor
* just a thought ~Â :Â )
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I actually liked that you put âjust a thoughtâ at the end under the write. Because the whole thing reads like a visual description of a mind thinking, ticking over possibilities. The best brains are those who are not afraid to keep thinking out the box. I think anyway. I tried hard to pull out a favourite stanza. But I just canât. Itâs all so good Tony. A fab write on the twists and turns of a thinking brain. Each stanza is brimming with imagery. Quite dreamy. I also liked how deep the rabbit hole went here.Â
wonderful my friend :)
YAY!! Thanx GWEN!!...you are such an astute reader and comprehender of the poetic......your eye, so keen.....and your mind so open to ANY and ALL possibilities!!.....I thank you dear poet sister....for all of your kind insights and well conveyed impressions!!......Hugs n High Fives!!......T xo : )
Well Tony you never stop amazing me my friend. Another superb write and agree with Gwendoline the "just a thought" says it all đđđđđđ
Yes KEITH!!....I agree completely.....the "just a thought" led the reader precisely to the heart of it!!......Thank you kindly brother!!.....Lots of Love to you and yours my friend!!.....smiles......T xo : )
âWhile preparing us all
For that which will help them
Maintain and perpetually win
Invisible powerâ
Itâs all about power. The few telling the many what to do and how to think.
This phenomenon goes back as far as people go back.
Great write!
Thanx Tons JP!!...and you are SOOO right about that...I tried my best to convey that thought and allow it to percolate to the top!! (smiles).....thanx again for the kind words brother!!.....Beware: "Big brother Is Watching!!" (more smiles)......Hugs n High Fives!!......T xo : )
Awww yes â Just a thoughtâ but arenât we always thinking lol we just canât help ourselves haha â¤ď¸đšâ¤ď¸
I know I can't help myself!! (smiles).....thanx for this JILL!!.....it is appreciated my friend......smiles....T xo : )
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To me this write epitomises a brain out of control, bordering on madness...overstimulated with the very 'madness' and futility of it all...I may be way off track Tony but I feel very at home in this brain...I know this place! Great write x
Amen MARION!!....it IS that as well...VERY much so!!.......Thank you for your keen insight my friend.....and for your kind and compelling impressions!!....Big Hugs!!.......T xo : )
Your writing is amazing. I bet if they did an MRI of your brain, the creative part would light up the room. Â
LOL!!...I hope they don't have to quite that far~!! (smiles)....thanx for this SHIRLEY!!.....I appreciate it VERY much....apologies for the late reply my friend!!....Lots of Love to you and yours!!......Hugs......T xo : )
The mind in its purest form. Love the imagery in this one. Also congrats on 1100 followers! But who`s counting? ;) We already know you`re a legend Tony! Smiles to you. Your friend Fish~
LOL!!...wow!!...thanx for pointing that out FISH!!...I would not have noticed that as a milestone had you not pointed it out!!.....Thanx so much...just for being cool!!......and you ARE that MAX!!.....Glide On love Brother!!......T xo : )
Well planned restraints .
Yeah the so and so's.Â
Big Smiles!!...Thank You LILIANA!!......Hope you're having a great day today.....and my apologies for the late reply!!......Lots O love to you and yours!!......T xo : )