Poem -
The thing am missing
by: benice A
Where are you, this is not a coup
What are you, I have no clue
How long has it been, I am not sure
Who are you, have we meet before
Do you have it, the other piece
What is it, I have no clueÂ
I need a glue, when I find it
I am not a whole
Who did i give it to, I am not sure
Have I ever had itÂ
I know I need to find it
Is it a who or is it an it, I have no clueÂ
This is not a coup, but would you be my glue
If i ever find it, cause I am not a whole without itÂ
I know i need a glue when I find it
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Comments
have you ever felt like your missing something, but yet, have no idea as to what it is?
Hi there Benice first of all welcome to cosmo! Have you been writing long? This is an interesting piece and i can understand the flow you're trying to convey. Please don't be disheartened at the lack of response, some of my earlier writes didn't attract too much attention either so please keep trying and you will eventually find your muse. I like this write and to encourage you further im giving it 5 stars! I hope you write more.Â
thanks.Â
am a 17 years old junior, soon to be senior, who have been writing since middle school. I mostly just want people to see my work, so am grateful.
thanks again.Â
No problem at all, this site constantly tests you as a writer, I have nearly give in before and walked away from lack of response but now I just enjoy what I do! Looking forward to reading more of your work.Â
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