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The value of oxygen and life

The value of oxygen and life

Dear God I thank you
for every single precious breath
And when you'll place us in paradise
   We shall thank you then for death.

People round the world gasping for breath, breathless,
short of breath, some unable to catch their breath,
       some breathing their last,
some on artificial costly breathalysers .
How many times do we thank God
for the countless free breaths we breathe our entire life??
Oxygen o2 more valuable and scarce than diamonds nowadays.
         Respiration, the main need of all life
Those who eventually recover from covid and find their breath again
             can finally breathe a sigh of relief.
Yet heavenly sights in paradise  will be sure
  to take our breath away anyway.

           Life or afterlife
      Here and hereafter
   Life's a gift from God
Now and thereafter
Why end it here and now
Why not extend fun and laughter?
When my DNA and RNA expires with me
May God Resurrect and revive it in me
I live and die for an extension of life in afterlife
   God grant me that part eternity
To search for the meaning and purpose of life
   is to search and find the Creator of all life
      i know there's out there somewhere
     in Allah's universe, a heavenly portal
      that will lead me to eternal bliss
            designed by Allah the immortal.
Imagine a perfect heavenly life with no fear , death or problems
That's a life to die for, when Allah transports us to those realms.

    An abode with no sickness or illness
Only peace and total eternal happiness
No viruses but rather real flying horses like real Pegasuses
   We could get to ride and fly the universe
   with angelic wings without planes or buses
But you have to work to earn and deserve that heavenly paradise
        Just follow God's latest holy book, so perfect and so wise.

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BelleBelle

Wow, absolutely inspiring. I loved this. 

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Tony Owen

Wonderful, thought provoking writing, thank you for sharing.

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Carol Anne

This is so feeling and feeling . Life is a gift from god . Beautiful written . Love this 😊🌹

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Richard Waters

Rewarding poem with real heart. Thanks for sharing. Wishing you all the best.

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Liliana of the ...

A thought I had, was that we are the breath of the eternal as well as every thing that is in creation. 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Warm thanks for a fine comment dear. Nice to hear from you. Regards, 🌷

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Susan Chetcuti

A well written piece which captures the most important essence of living. 

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Yiyan Han

Yes, God is Light, and God is the Essence. Well penned. Kind regards, Yiyan

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Janice Cook

I see nothing but beauty but in my frame of mind I just want to take my last ever breath and fly away from my enteral hell I live each day

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Wow that was a quote same to the one said by the holy Lady Zainab (s.a r.a ) who said ' i see nothing but beauty " though her family and children had been murdered by terrors worldly powers.
Im sad to hear life is  hell yeah it can be sometimes for me too but heaven will be so perfect so let's hope and pray for it in afterlife. May God make life easy and bearable for us all. Take care and warm thanks for comment. 

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Syd

Although I'm not religious, I enjoyed this poem.

- Syd 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Um yeah i hope it can be enjoyed as literary fun as well. Thanks soo much for comment,

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