Poem -
THE VISITOR~
You are not of my world
Though I know well the place
You inhabit~
The place you lie barren
Curled up and old
Cocooned in the blackness
And icy cold cold
While I in my world
Must choose to ignore
The chitter the chatter
The bang on the door
A battle of wills
Of potions and pills
Of winners and losers
And apathy thrills
You are not of my world
Though I know well the place
You inhabit~
You lie waiting unfurled
Languid uncurled
A grin on your face
A traveller in space
You are fox with a rabbit
You are fish hook with bate
You are nails upon blackboards
That poor hope can't abate
You are not of my world
Though I know well the place
You inhabit~
For I visit often
Marion Price(2020)
Comments
Awwww brilliant wording luv ❤️💗❤️
Hey Jill, missed you! Just talking to Matthew about a competition next week?? You up for it...Need a bit of fun with all you lovely people. Thanks love...hugs 💕
Yes luv course I am my lil Chickadee ❤️❤️❤️
Brill...I think Matthew is having first go...lol...the mind boggles already...lol...get ready for his 'interjection' here Jill...😆😆😆
Pml 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 teehee 😃❤️🥰❤️
Beautiful write. It's so so good as always xxx
what competition you guys entering? Any of you won?
I'm now getting used to Matthew's interjections too 🤣🤣🤣
Px
Funnily enough i just messaged you about it then realised you wouldn't get it as it's on a poem not an email...we thought we might put one out next week or Matthew will...you up for it Pratibha?? Course you are...bit of fun. Keep an eye out for Matthews challenge ok and thankyou for your lovely comments 💕
Ok! I will do my best but you guys are the bomb at these poems and rhyming business and just churn them out!! Px
That's cos we write any old rubbish for the challenges, you can cheat and all sorts, it's a free for all...great fun, honestly Pratibha, you should have seen the nonsense in the sock one we did...they were shameful...lol. 😆😁😁
Hi Marion..Another ghostly tale! It would be a battle of wills to try to get a ghost to stop haunting....the visitor that never leaves...Great write, again...You are great at these kind of spooky tales. xo Love n Hugs
Something in the air tonight...lol...thankyou so much my friend 💕
Oh Marion... I know that place too! That dark, deep hole. The feeling that you are trapped in a bubble and cannot get out. You have worded this sooooo well 👍 x
I truly appreciate you taking the time lovely lady...thankyou 💕