Poem -
the wardrobes and i
there is an emptiness in this
room
the wardrobes joke about it
i hear them sniggering...calling
out...
to the day just beyond
come...highlight it, they say
come join the void where,
the silences party
where the shade shadows creep
where the mirrors pretend
and reflect...
extra feet
i am not fooled
M P 28/9/21
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Hi MP.
Great work, I like this kind of write.
JP
Hi John...i am rushing but will be on later to catch up with yours my friend. Do you? Then I advise you to read Neville on here...he is a great writer and manages to create feeling and atmosphere In an unique way with few words...hugs x
Hi John...I am rushing out but will be on later to catch up with yours my friend. Do you? Then I advise you to read Neville on here...he is a great writer and manages to create
feeling and atmosphere in an unique way with few words...hugs x
I like the message in this write. A wardrobe. All our feelings, experiences, thoughts are all packed in the wardrobe. Sometimes it's empty.
My wardrobe is a mess, need to tidy up just like my thoughts LOL.
Thankyou x
Ah!!....I do so love the imagination and its ability to transport us!!......ALL STARS!!....a pleasure dear poet sister!!......T xo : )