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the WINNER is....

he borrowed heat
off the devil
made a campfire

stole the bite
off the cold
beat the frost
into liar 

chuckled
as he smoked out
the
shiney tiny
stars

raised
his full glass
​​​​​​right up
to 
the dead eye
of Mars

He knew he'd won

M P 24/3/21

 

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Jill Tait

Your imagination is truly something else Marion ❤️💙❤️

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Marion

Aw thankyou Jill...appreciated love ❤️

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Jim "The Lad" ....

FUN STUFF! I just can't imagine the devil lending anything ! lol! enjoyed the write Marion ! your mind is a treasure!.............................................Jim

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Marion

Yea...it's buried quite deep Jim, takes a lot of digging to find it mostly...lol. thankyou lovely man x

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Shaun Cronick

Marion so cleverly written  and devilishly nice and such great fun to read. 
And the real winner is your good self!❤️
Full honours awarded and thanks for writing and sharing.❤️

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Marion

Thanks Shaun...really appreciated my friend X

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Pratibha Savani

Love your imaginative surreal writes.  They are magnificent. Pinned! Px

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Marion

Aw...thankyou love...so appreciated Pratibha...🤗🤗🤗

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Being Me

And, when he raised his glass up to the dead eye of Mars, he grinned and yelled, "Fuck you!!"  

Love this because it has amazing attitude and it made me smile ⚘x

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Marion

Glad you 'got' it...appreciated as always love X

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